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4.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(╲)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
I often quarrel with my mother over if I can watch TV after school.My mother thinks that senior students,burden with their studies,are so busy to spare any time to watch TV.It seemed to her that I will not able to control myself and forget all about my study once I am allowed to.She also thinks that it's bad for her eyes to watch TV too often.But I really can't accept her ideas.I think it's relaxed to watch TV before a day's hard work.It can set my mind at rest and broaden my horizons as well.Besides,and we can be kept informed of what's happening at home.
Now we have reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends,and the content is limited to news and proram of entertainment,sports and science.

分析 本文主要讲述母亲不让我放学后看电视,最终,我与母亲达成协议,我被允许在周末看新闻、娱乐节目及体育和科学节目.

解答 I often quarrel with my mother over if I can watch TV after school.My mother thinks that senior students,burden with their studies,are so busy to spare any time to watch TV.It seemed to her that I will not∧able to control myself and forget all about my study once I am allowed to.She also thinks that it's bad for her eyes to watch TV too often.But I really can't accept her ideas.I think it's relaxed to watch TV before a day's hard work.It can set my mind at rest and broaden my horizons as well.Besides,and we can be kept informed of what's happening at home.
Now we have reached an agreement that I can only watch TV at weekends,and the content is limited to news and program of entertainment,sports and science.
详解:
1.if改为whether 考查连词.介词后接宾语从句时,要用连词whether,不用if.
2.burden改为burdened 考查过去分词.be burdened with意为"负重担,麻烦",是固定搭配,过去分词短语在句中作原因状语.
3.so改为too 考查固定搭配.too…to…句型为"too+形容词或副词+to do…"译为"太…而不能…",它在形式上是肯定的,但在义上是否定的.
4.seemed改为seems 考查动词时态.全文讲述的是现在的事情,要用一般现在时态.
5.加be 考查固定搭配.情态动词will后面要接动词原形,be unable to do sth意为"不能做某事".是固定搭配.
6.her改为his 考查代词.根据句意:她认为时常看电视对我的眼睛有害.应是my eyes.
7.relaxed改为relaxing 考查现在分词.现在分词作表语主要表示主语的性质和特征.
8.before改为after 考查连词.根据句意:我认为一天的努力学习后看电视是轻松的.用after.
9.去掉and 考查词语用法.前生并没有两个单句,不用连词.
10.program改为programs 考查名词复数.program意为"节目",是可数名词,要用复数.

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.

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