题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华,高中毕业10年后,从报纸上获悉母校将要举行100周年校庆。请给远在美国的同桌Peter写一封电子邮件,相约一起回母校参加活动。要点如下:
1. 回忆高中快乐生活。
2. 校庆活动介绍。
3. 捐设奖学金。
参考词汇: 百年校庆 100th anniversary celebration; 奖学金 scholarship
Dear Peter,
How is everything going recently?
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】I’m writing to invite you to go back to our senior high school to celebrate her 100th anniversary. It has been 10 years since we graduated from it. Do you still remember the days we spent studying and playing together? Till now, these memories remain fresh.
As I know, the celebration will last for 3 days from Oct 1st to Oct 3rd . Schoolmates will gather to meet their old friends. An evening party will be held to feast people’s eyes. When we meet, I suppose money should be raised to set up a scholarship which is used to provide finacial support for the students from rural areas. What do you think about it?
I am looking forward to your early coming!.
【解析】本文是一篇书信类作文。要求你以李华的身份要给你远在美国的高中同桌Peter发一封电子邮件,相约一起回母校参加100周年校庆活动.动笔前,一定要认真分析要点,理解要点要表达的含义,不能遗漏要点,不能出现跑题偏题。文章给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达,1.问候昔日同桌,回忆同学友情;2.校庆活动介绍;3.捐设奖学金。
使用的人称:以第一人称为主。时态:一般现在时。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,也要加入高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次,如:remain fresh,feast people’s eyes,suppose,set up和句型,以提高文章的档次;恰当使用一些连词As I know,使文章表达自然,流畅。注意次数:100词左右。
【范文亮点】①It has been 20 years since we graduated from high school.状语从句。②I suppose money should be raised to set up a scholarship which is used to provide financial support for the students from rural areas.定语从句。