题目内容
【题目】1. Online shopping, a form of e-commerce, is very popular among most Internet users around the world. Almost 85 percent of Web users in the United States shop online. Korea, with 99 percent, is one of the most popular countries where Internet users shop online.
2. Below is a chart which shows Alibaba’s Singles’ Day Sales(billion yuan)in 2009-2016
3. ACCORDING TO the results of a quality inspection by the State Administration for Industry and Commerce of products sold on the Internet, of 497 products sampled, 172 did pass the quality test, Products sold through T-mall and Taobao proved to be the least qualified. Beijing Youth Daily commented on Wednesday.
【写作内容】
1.用约30个单词概述上述文字及图表的主要内容;
2.简要分析网络购物流行的主要原因;
3.请你对于如何规范网络销售提出具体措施(不少于两点)。
【写作要求】
1.写作过程中不能直接引用原文读句;
2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
【评分标准】
内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。
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【答案】Online shopping enjoys great popularity all over the world, especially in US, Korea and China and recent years have seen its dramatic development in China. Meanwhile, problems have arisen concerning poor-quality products.
Reasons responsible for its popularity are as follows. To begin with, items online offer a big price advantage and convenience, saving us a considerable amount of money and trouble of going out or queuing up. Moreover, with varieties of brands products available on the Internet, we can choose and get whatever we want.
From my perspective it is extremely important to regulate online sales to prevent online consumers from being cheated. First and foremost, the government and companies concerned are supposed to pass severe laws and regulations to supervise. Additionally, it is every online shop’s duty to guarantee their product quality. Last but not least, we wise consumers can turn to law to safeguard our rights and interests when problems occur. With combined efforts, the Internet will be a real paradise for shops and consumers.
【解析】这是一篇涉及图表以及文字说明的作文,学生在写作的时候,应该把握住题干要求,包括认真分析图表内容和文字说明,看图表时,注意图表各项数据以及趋势,抓住重点给予描述,这是一幅柱状图,介绍了近几年阿里巴巴在光棍节的销售额,从图表中的趋势可以看出,销售额在逐年提高。文字部分介绍了网上购物最受欢迎的国家,包括美国和韩国,以及网上购物出现劣质产品的问题。可总结文字以及图表的内容为三部分:1.中、美、韩三国的网上购物十分流行,特别是中国近年来火爆的网购现象。2.网上购物出现的劣质产品问题值得关注。学生在此类文章写作时,可以按照三个步骤来进行:现象,原因,建议。
第一段描述图标以及文字的内容信息:(1)“Online shopping enjoys great popularity ....,especially in US,Korea and China and ....”介绍了中美韩三国火爆的浪潮。(2)“Meanwhile,problems have arisen ...”提出了网购出现的问题。
第二段给出出现上述现象的原因:分为两个部分(1)网购价格便宜,“To begin with, items online offer a big price advantage and convenience...”(2)网购的产品多样“Moreover, with varieties of brands products available on the Internet....”
第三段提出解决问题的建议或者措施:(1)相关法律法规的监督“to pass severe laws and regulations to supervise.”(2)道德层面的呼吁“online shop’s duty”,网店应该有责任意识。(3)消费者应该维护自身权益“consumers can turn to law to safeguard our rights and interests”
【范文亮点】
1.连词的使用使得文章简洁明了,结构流畅,层次分明,比如第二段介绍原因的时候使用“To begin with,....”和“moreover,....”,分两点说明。以及第三段给出的建议同样使用了“First and foremost,.....”,“Additionally,...”以及“Last but not least,...”,学生可在平时写作中多积累此类连词。
2. 文章运用了varieties of,poor-quality等清新词汇。