Question

【题目】请阅读下面有关中国在线外卖现状调查的柱状图及相关文字，并按照要求用 英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

The scale of consumers of fast food delivery service in China

The fast food delivery service, which depends on the already-existing restaurants, can cover a larger place with more customers without taking the seats of restaurants. Under the current economic and market condition, the fast food delivery service has been the new battlefield of the fast food giants in China. Even MacDonald’s and KFC, the two international fast food giants are fighting against each other for more market share in China’s fast food delivery industry.

However, Jing Linbo, Deputy Director of the Institute of Finance and Trade Economics, the Chinese Academy of Social Science, thought that the fast food delivery is the new growth point of fast food enterprises. But the fast food enterprises should have certain comprehensive strengths to do this service, which is thought to be different from the traditional food industry in some aspects.

Besides, with the development of the new industry, there also emerge problems. And some observers have given their warnings. They warn that if the fast food enterprises take no notice of the hidden problems, they will lose the customers in the competitive market gradually.

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述上述信息的主要内容；

2. 结合上述信息，简要分析外卖盛行的主要原因；

3. 请从消费者角度谈谈你对外卖的看法及建议，用2-3个理由支撑你的观点。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

（评分标准）

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】The fast food delivery service, new and emerging, is being chased by food business tycoons. Enormous potential as it holds to generate more revenues for fast food companies, this burgeoning industry carries with it several concealed challenges.

Behind the rise of the delivery service lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the research and development of high-tech killer apps such as Meituan and Elema. By liaising closely with restaurants, consumers and riders, these apps enable customers to enjoy great delicacies with a simple click of the mouse. Another reason is our fast contemporary living pace. Why bother, some argue, to eat out when you can continue working at desk with your food on the way.

For the service to develop sustainably and virtuously, firstly, we need to ensure the safety of the riders, who constantly race against time and jump red lights. Thus, deliver compaines need to buy them life insurances and give them adequate security training. Moreover, since a sea of plastic waste would be produced by this industry, the restaurant might charge consumers extra money for the packages or encourage them to use bowls and chopsticks of their own when dining.

【解析】

第一段:

这篇材料属于社会现象类，一点办法都没有，孩子们首先需要采用串线法，把每一段和图表的大意概括出来，然后再把这些大意理清楚逻辑关系，串成一个有机的整体。

图表信息:外卖行业欣欣向荣地发展:

第一段:外卖服务能够使传统餐馆的业务得到拓展，所以导致很多餐饮巨头争夺外卖服务这块肥肉。

第二段:外卖服务是快餐公司的新的增长点，但是快餐公司需要有综合实力才能够把外卖服务做好。

第三段:外卖服务也有潜在的问题，快餐公司需要注意这些潜在的问题。

串线法串下来，30个字概括的中文版就有了:

外卖服务能够使传统餐馆的业务得到拓展，所以导致很多餐饮巨头争夺外卖服务这块肥肉。虽然外卖服务是快餐公司的新的增长点，但是快餐公司需要有综合实力才能够把外卖服务做好。再次，外卖服务也有潜在的问题，快餐公司需要注意这些潜在的问题。

英文版本为:

The fast food delivery service, new and emerging, is being chased by food business tycoons. Enormous potential as it holds to generate more revenues for fast food companies, this burgeoning industry carries with it several concealed challenges.

注意:务必在首段注意好单词的同意替换，不要照抄原文，比如chase替换掉了原文的the new battlefield. growth point被替换成了generate more revenue, hidden被替换了concealed, problem被替换成了challenges. 只要这样，才能凸显出你没有照抄原文，你的词汇量是丰富多彩的！

第二段:

外卖行业崛起的原因，首先我们要向内看，即它本身是非常方便又快捷的，同时它借助手机app,精准地连接了目标客户和餐馆，把美味带给了更多的家庭和个人，其次很多人足不出户，手机上一点就可以坐等美食，正是因为这一点，导致了它的崛起。

向外看，即外卖行业处在互联网时代，因为美团，饿了吗这样的app的研发，因为骑手的招募，使得整个产业链得以运转。

于是英文版是:

Behind the rise of the delivery service lie two major drivers, the first of which goes to the research and development of high-tech killer apps such as Meituan and Elema. By liaising closely with restaurants, consumers and riders, these apps enable customers to enjoy great delicacies with a simple click of the mouse. Another reason is our fast contemporary living pace. Why bother, some argue, to eat out when you can continue working at desk with your food on the way.

第三段:

你对外卖的看法和建议，还是选择向内看，向外看的角度来产生观点。首先，外卖行业依赖外卖小哥，他们风里来雨里去，为了和时间赛跑而闯红绿灯，而发生交通事故，所以我们应该在保证他们安全的前提下，将食物安全送达。其次，相比堂吃，外卖产生的固体和塑料污染不可小觑，因此，我们可以对消费者增收包装盒钱，或者鼓励他们使用自己的餐具，以唤醒他们的环保意识。

英文版是:

For the service to develop sustainably and virtuously, firstly, we need to ensure the safety of the riders, who constantly race against time and jump red lights. Thus, deliver compaines need to buy them life insurances and give them adequate security training. Moreover, since a sea of plastic waste would be produced by this industry, the restaurant might charge consumers extra money for the packages or encourage them to use bowls and chopsticks of their own when dining.