题目内容
【题目】请一下列词语为关键词写一篇英语短文。
exam help mistake progress
内容: 1. 自己或他人的经历;
2. 你的感受。
注意: 1. 必须使用所给的4个关键词语;
2. 词数不少于120个。
【答案】When I was in Senior 1, I didn’t study English hard, so my English was very poor. But my deskmate Zhang Yan was quite good at English. Once I whispered to her for the answers during an English exam. She refused to help me, which made me angry and upset. A few days later, Zhang Yan came to talk with me about my English. Her words made me realize the mistake I’d made. To my delight, Zhang Yan promised to help me with my English study from then on. And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my English. Now I’m also one of the top students in English in my class.
I appreciate her help very much all the time. I feel Zhang Yan is my real friend. What I need in my life is such a good friend.
【解析】此文通过英语提高的过程很好的把这几个词联系起来,形成一篇结构严谨,遣词造句很好的文章。文章中用了高级词汇和句子结构,如: which made me angry and upset. Her words made me realize the mistake I’d made.定语从句和宾语复合结构;And it was with her help that I was able to make rapid progress in my English.强调句型;To my delight;appreciate; What I need in my life is such a good friend.