Question

【题目】Optimism（乐观）always leads to happiness, health and success while pessimism（悲观）, by contrast, results in hopelessness, sickness and failure．That’s because optimists and pessimists deal with the same challenges and disappointments in very different ways．

注意：1．无须写标题，不得照抄英语提示语；

2．除诗歌之外，文体不限；

3．内容必须结合生活中的一个事例；

4．文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数不少于120左右。

Answer 1

【答案】

Optimism is important in all aspects of our life．If you can change your mind from pessimism, you can change your life．

Up to the beginning of Senior Grade Two, I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself．I kept practicing speaking, listening, reading and writing．When I was fed up with reading or writing, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories, jokes and humors or seeing English films．When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing, I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．By this means, I always made myself cheerful and optimistic, full of splendid and colorful dreams of future．I kept practicing．Gradually, I made progress in my English．．

Thanks to the optimism, I have become one of the top students in my class by now．

【解析】

试题分析：本篇书面表达属于话题类作文，根据提示信息和要求行文。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确有哪些要点。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。本文写作时可以按照夹叙夹议的方式来写3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时和过去时连用。 4.注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点。

【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种句式和结构。比如运用条件状语从句：If you can change your mind from pessimism, you can change your life；使用强调：I did poorly in my English but I didn’t give in because I was always encouraged by both the people around me and myself；运用时间状语从句：When I was fed up with reading or writing, I usually entertained myself by reading some interesting English stories, jokes and humors or seeing English films．When I had some trouble in reciting or memorizing, I tried to amuse myself by playing word games or singing English songs．等。此外，文章还使用了大量短语in all aspects of，Up to the beginning of，give in，keep doing，be fed up with，have some trouble in，By this means等使用使文章内容更具有层次感，也使语言更加连贯。