Question

假定你是李津。请你给你的美籍同学Peter发一个e-mail，告诉他周日在你们市体育馆有一场中韩男子篮球赛，并邀请他一起去观看。

内容包括：

1．比赛开始时间：周日上午9点；

2．询问Peter是否感兴趣：

3．如果Peter答应看球赛，你将提前购票，并在体育馆入口处等他。

注意：

1．词数不少于100；

2．可适当加入细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯；

3．开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

参考词汇：韩国Korea 体育馆stadium

Dear Peter,

How are you doing?

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I’m looking forward to your early reply．

Yours，

Li Jin

 

Answer 1

Dear Peter,

How are you doing? I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea in the stadium of our city this Sunday. It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball stars will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for us to watch them playing live. I like basketball very much and I know basketball is also your favorite sport, so I am inviting you to watch the game. If you are interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can buy the tickets ahead of time. The match starts at nine o’clock in the morning and I’ll wait for you at the entrance to the stadium at half past eight.

I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Jin

【解析】

试题分析：本文是书信类作文，请你给你的美籍同学Peter发一个e-mail，告诉他周日在你们市体育馆有一场中韩男子篮球赛，并邀请他一起去观看。文章的要点也基本上都给出来了，而且很具体，考生要把要点解释清楚，不能有遗漏。在写作的过程中，要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型，如强调句，倒装句等，让文章更上档次。同时在列举措施的时候要使用合适的连接词如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，让文章看起来很有条理，也很流畅。

【亮点说明】所给范文语言简洁，应用了一些较好的词组和句子：as soon as possible 尽快，ahead of time提前， I’m writing to tell you a piece of good news that there’ll be a men’s basketball match between China and Korea in the stadium of our city this Sunday.这句话用了同位语从句， It’s reported that a number of well-known basketball stars will appear in the game so it’s a good chance for us to watch them playing live. 这句话用了两个it做形式主语， If you are interested, please let me know as soon as possible so that I can buy the tickets ahead of time.这句话用了结果状语从句。

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