Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改 10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分

When I was at middle school, I have a nice classmate, that was the first foreigner I had ever met. She was friendly and very pretty. She was good in three languages, although he was born in China. It was interested that her father was a Frenchman while her mother came from England. All of them were teaching at a university at that time. She was crazy collecting stamps, listening to pop music, as well as playing the football. Her dream was to be an engineer, so she usually studied harder to achieve it. She often told funny stories in English to make us laughing. We all liked her.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】have 改为had;

【2】that改为who

【3】in 改为at

【4】he 改为she

【5】interested 改为interesting

【6】All 改为 Both;

【7】collecting 前加about

【8】harder 改为 hard;

【9】laughing 改为laugh

【10】are改为is

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于记叙文，主要介绍了作者的一位老同学以及这位老同学的具体信息及家庭情况。

【1】文中第一行have 改为had。根据前半句中的was 判断时态为一般过去式。所以have要变为过去式had

【2】that改为who。 本题是一个定语从句，先行词是a nice classmate，关系代词who指代先行词在句中作主语，不能省略。

【3】文中第二行in 改为at。Be good at 擅长…，固定搭配，所以要将in改为at

【4】文中第三行he 改为she。根据前半句，主语是she，集合语境这里的主语并没有发生改变，所以将he改为she

【5】文中第三行interested 改为interesting， interesting 主语通常是物。而interested主语通常是人，这里是it作形式主语，故将interested 改为interesting

【6】文中第四行All 改为Both; 这里的them指代作者的同学和她父亲，是两个人，而all表示三个人，故用both。

【7】文中第五行collecting 前加about。原句中的collecting前面是动词crazy，动词后面不可能直接再接一个动词，所以需要介词来连接。

【8】文中第五行去掉the。球类运动前面不加冠词。

【9】文中第六行harder 改为 hard;这里并没有表示更努力，所以不用比较级，改为hard。

【10】文中第七行laughing 改为laugh。固定结构make sb do sth，所以将laughing改为laugh。