Question

【题目】假定你是李华，上周六你参加了在市歌剧院举办的“京剧演唱会”。你的外教Miss Smart是京剧爱好者。请给她写封信，介绍演唱会的情况。内容包括：

1.演员:京剧名家；

2.观众:热情激动；

3.你的感受:爱上京剧。

参考词汇:草剧Beijing Opera

注意:1.词数100左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Miss Smart，

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Smart，

Last Saturday I attended the Beijing Opera Concert held at the City Opera House. 【高分句型一】As I know you are a Beijing Opera Lover， I am writing to tell you something about the Beijing Opera Concert.（写信目的）

There were many actors for Opera taking part in the concert， among whom many were famous. 【高分句型二】（演员：京剧名家） I was impressedd by their sweet voice and beautiful moves. Watching the concert were the audience who were exciting and enthusiastic. （观众：热情激动）I was affected by the atmosphere. After the experience I fell in love with Beijing Opera and I determined to study it. Would you please join me？（你的感受：爱上京剧）

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours，

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封书信：假定你是李华，上周六你参加了在市歌剧院举办的“京剧演唱会”。你的外教Miss Smart是京剧爱好者。请给她写封信，介绍演唱会的情况。内容包括：1.演员:京剧名家；2.观众:热情激动；3.你的感受:爱上京剧。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the Beijing Opera Concert（京剧演唱会）；a Beijing Opera Lover（一名京剧爱好者）；taking part in the concert（参加音乐会）；等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。