题目内容
【题目】你班的英国交换生Alice因家中有事于上月回国,之后一直没有消息。请你以班长李华的名义给她写一封电子邮件,要点如下:
1. 询问其近况及归来时间;
2. 让她不要担心课程,回来后你们会帮她补课;
3. 老师也很挂念她,请对方尽快回复。
注意:
1. 词数:100左右;2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Alice,
How are you doing recently? It has been a month since you left China for your hometown and we all miss you very much.
Is there anything wrong? We are eager to know what has happened to your family and wondering when you will return to our school. By the way, don’t worry about your study because we are all willing to help you to make up for your subjects once you are left behind. I believe you can catch up with us very soon. Our teachers are also concerned about you, so if it is convenient to you, please write back to me as soon as possible.
Hope everything goes well. Best wishes!
Sincerely yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生写一封邮件,向Alice询问相关情况。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
人称:第一、二人称为主
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时为主
结构:总分总法
要求:1. 询问其近况及归来时间;
2. 让她不要担心课程,回来后你们会帮她补课;
3. 老师也很挂念她,请对方尽快回复。
第二步:列提纲(重点词组)
hometown;be eager to;return to;worry about;by the way;be willing to;make up for;leave behind;catch up with;be concerned about;convenient;as soon as possible;go well等
第三步:连词成句
1. It has been a month since you left China for your hometown and we all miss you very much.
2. We are eager to know what has happened to your family and wondering when you will return to our school.
3. By the way, don’t worry about your study because we are all willing to help you to make up for your subjects once you are left behind.
4. I believe you can catch up with us very soon.
5. Our teachers are also concerned about you, so if it is convenient to you, please write back to me as soon as possible.
6. Hope everything goes well.
7. How are you doing recently?
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表并列补充关系:and;by the way;
2.表因果关系:because;so;
3.表条件关系:if等
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰。
第五步:润色修改