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1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号 （∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线 （\） 划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
 2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in city．It will be held in the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1000painting will be on show，but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．

分析 本文是一份邀请函，作者正在组织一个高中学生的艺术展．该展会将于7月9日在北海展览厅举行．有超过1000幅图画作品将被展示，同时来自所有8个地区的高中学生都会参加这次活动．邀请一位名人参加此次展览．

解答 I am secretary of the City Student Union （CSU）．We were organizing an art exhibition for high school students in∧city．It will be held in the 9th of July in the Exhibition Hall of Beihai．More than 1000painting will be on show，but high school students and teachers from all the eight districts will come to the event．As you are very popularly with us Chinese high school students，we'd like to invite for you to the exhibition．We would be grateful when you could join them that day．Looking forward to hear from you soon．
详解：
1．were改为are 考查动词时态．从上下文中可以看出，要用现在进行时，而非过去进行时态．
2．加the 考查冠词．此处的城市指我所在的城市，表示特指，要加定冠词the．
3．in改为on 考查介词．在特定的某一天要用介词on，而不是介词in．
4．painting改为paintings 考查名词复数．painting意为"画"，是可数名词，其前有数词修饰时，要用复数形式．
5．but改为and 考查连词． 此处是承接上一句的意思，而非转折．
6．popularly改为popular 考查形容词．be popularly with中要用形容词，此处是形容词作表语，而非修饰动词．be popular with意为"受…欢迎"．
7．去掉for 考查谓语动词．invite是及物动词，后可直接接名词或代词作宾语，不必接介词．
8．when改为if 考查虚拟语气．此处表示的是虚拟语气，要用if．
9．them改为us 考查代词．这是一份邀请函，应是加入到我们之中．
10．hear改为hearing 考查动名词．在look forward to中to是介词，后接动词时要动名词形式．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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