Question

【题目】假设你叫John，你的同学Tom写信向你请教如何养成良好的英语学习习惯。 请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文写一封建议信，要点如下：

1. 说明学习习惯与学习效果之间的关系；

2. 介绍一种好的学习习惯并提出养成该习惯的建议；

3. 描述同学们在学习习惯方面存在的问题并给出改进措施。

注意：词数100左右，开头语已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom,

I am really glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on how to develop good learning habits in learning English.

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Yours.

John

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I am really glad to receive your letter asking for some advice on how to develop good learning habits in learning English.

As we all know, good learning habits can make our study succeed. With good learning habits, we can get twice the result with half the effort. So we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.

I’m sure “repeat” is a good habit. We often say “repetition is the mother of memory.” If we want to learn English well, we need to repeat, repeat, and repeat. This is the only secret. How to develop the habit? First, set a timetable. Second, stick to the plan and don’t stop.

Some of my classmates are lazy and careless in learning English. I think it should be a good idea to repeat more and practice more, and think it over when we do our homework. I hope my advice will be of some help to you.

Best wishes

Yours

John

【解析】

本篇书面表达属于应用类作文，是一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，假设你叫John，你的同学Tom写信向你请教如何养成良好的英语学习习惯。 请你结合自身学习实际，按以下提示，用英文写一封建议信。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：as we all know众所周知，learning habit学习习惯，succeed成功，effort努力，pay more attention to更加注意，repeat重复，stick to坚持，lazy懒惰， careless粗心的。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

亮点说明：作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：So we should pay more attention to our habits which we develop in our study.定语从句的运用；I think it should be a good idea to repeat more and practice more, and think it over when we do our homework.宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。