Question

【题目】假如你是高二（1）班的班长李华，你们班打算开一次题为“如何提高英语口语水平”的主题班会，想邀请外籍教师Johnson参加，请你给他写一封邮件，邀请他参加此次活动。具体内容如下：

时间：下周一下午5:20。

地点：教学楼二层会议室。

希望Johnson能给大家一些提高英语口语的建议，并回答学生们提出的相关问题。

表示期待。

Dear Johnson, ________________________________________________________

________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Johnson,

Our class will hold a class meeting with the topic of “how to improve our oral English”, and here I seriously invite you to join us on behalf of our class.

Our class meeting will be held in the meeting room on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday. We sincerely hope that you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.

Thank you in advance! All of us will be looking forward to your coming.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】这是一篇邮件写作，考生首先要注意邮件的基本格式，称呼后面用逗号而不是冒号，落款处也需注意，写上敬语。本文主要交代的内容就是主题班会的时间，地点，以及希望John给出的建议。考生可能对书信邮件的写作比较陌生，不知该如何下笔。其实我们完全可以以不变应万变，用平时议论文的总分总结构来写。

1.表面写邮件目的：正文直接亮出目的（ I seriously invite you to join us on behalf of our class.），告知收件人写信的原因是邀请他参加班会。

2.交代相关的信息：时间和地点（Our class meeting will be held in the meeting room on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday.），希望受邀人发挥的作用（you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.）

3.结束语，表示对收件人的礼貌。（Thank you in advance! All of us will be looking forward to your coming.）

【范文亮点】

1.范文巧妙使用介词交代内容，简洁流畅。如用with结构，引出班会主题（with the topic of “how to improve our oral English”）；用介词on、at交代班会的时间和地点（on the second floor of the teaching building at 17:20 next Monday.）

2.范文运用了not only...but also关联词（you can not only come and offer some valuable suggestions on how to improve oral English but also answer the related questions raised by the students.）增加了范文的文采。