Question

6．某英文报近期举办以"感恩与我同行"为主题的英语征文大赛．请你据图及提示的内容写一篇感恩老师的英文短文参赛．
主要内容如下：
1）感谢老师的关心鼓励；
2）感谢老师的辛勤劳动；
3）感谢老师的谆谆教诲；
4）…
注意：
1．短文须围绕"感恩与我同行"的主题．
2．短文须包括所有内容要点，并适当发挥．
3．词数：120左右．
Thanks to You，My Teacher
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Answer 1

分析 本文为征文．本文主题为：感恩与我同行．
写作要点为：1）感谢老师的关心鼓励；
2）感谢老师的辛勤劳动；
3）感谢老师的谆谆教诲；
4）…

解答 One possible version：
Thanks to You，My Teacher
I would like to thank you for all the help you have given me．You are very friendly to everyone in our class．You always get on very well with us students．
What impresses me most is that you are not only our teacher but also our friend．You are always so patient whenever we ask you questions．We are all moved when you listen carefully and explain everything so thoroughly．You show us different ways to learn English．We feel so encouraged and become more comfortable in your class．You make your class so lively and interesting that every one of us is always eager to participate and practice．Our English has improved so much．
You teach us not only how to learn English well but also how to be good citizens．We owe much to you，my teacher．

点评 考生需了解写作要点及写作意图，合理安排写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．