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5.下面是一家报纸的专栏作家Maggie收到的读者寻求建议的来信,假如你是Maggie,请写一封回信,其中需包括你对来信所反映问题的观点和态度,以及你对"Doubtful Dad"的建议.
Dear Maggie,
My son just announced that he is going away to schoo1.Bobby is a good student,and I am proud of him.Any college would be lucky to have him.My concern is that he has never lived away from home before.Will he be able to take care of himself?What if there's an emergency?
Give me some advice so that I can relax!
Doubtful Dad
注意:
1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的开头已经给出,不计入总词数.
Dear Doubtful Dad,
I am really know your felling because nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life.Whereas,on one hand,these parents care and protect their children,on the other hand they may do harm to their children.
As far as I am concerned,it is necessary thatyou should giveyour sonmore space and freedom so thathe may become more independent.What's more,it is a good way to lethim study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own,such as,their relationship with friends and student,their study and busy life and so on.You should believe your child could do it well.By doing this,I believe,he may become more independent,brave and responsible.
In summary,spoiling children is no right.Don't worry.You should know better that an independent,responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Maggie.

分析 本篇来信中讲述了一名父亲十分担心他从未离家远行的孩子要远处出求学不能照顾好自己,怕出意外.而从中我们很容易知道这是由于父亲关心则乱.因此考生应从劝解父亲的方面入手,提出观点和建议.注意使用一般现在时,以及恰当的连接词.
重要短语:
 do harm to,对…有害,a good case in point,一个恰当的例子,in summary,总之
高分句子:
As far as I am concerned,it is necessary that parents should give your son more space and freedom so that he may become more independent.本句含有重要句型,it is necessary that,..是必要的.

解答 Dear Doubtful Dad,
     I am really know your felling because nowadays many parents have a common sense that their children are so precious to them so they always try their best to give their children a happy and meaningful life.Whereas,on one hand,these parents care and protect their children,on the other hand they may do harm to their children.(提出自己观点)
     As far as I am concerned,it is necessary that you should give your son more space and freedom so that he may become more independent.(高分句型)What's more,it is a good way to let him study in a boarding school for children must face something by their own,such as,their relationship with friends and student,their study and busy life and so on.You should believe your child could do it well.By doing this,I believe,he may become more independent,brave and responsible.(提出建议)
     In summary,spoiling children is no right.Don't worry.You should know better that an independent,responsible and brave person is able to adapt society better.(总结内容)
                                                                                                                                   Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                   ours,
                                                                                                                                    Maggie

点评 考生在写作时,需要做到以下几点:第一、认真审题,把握所有信息.第二、确定体裁,把握行文格式.第三、罗列提纲,思考表达方式.第四、组织语言,展开写作. 写作时,运用熟悉的英语词汇、句型等;要尽量运用多样化的句式,注意长短句的结合、简单句和复合句的结合;要注意上下文的衔接,过渡要自然.第五、认真检查,查漏补缺.

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(2)可适当增加细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;
(3)开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数.
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