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3．某海外学校举办英语夏令营，开设了如下课程：园艺（gardening），烹饪（cooking），防身术（self-defence），护理（nursing）．假如你是王跃华（不可以用自己的真实姓名），写一封申请信，报名参加其中一门课程的学习．信的内容必须包括：
（1）你感兴趣的课程
（2）你期望从这门课程中学到什么
（3）为什么想学这些内容．

Answer 1

分析 这是提纲类作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称，时态以一般现在时态为主，包括要点：一点题；二感兴趣的课程；三期望从这门课程中学到什么；四为什么想学这些内容．
高分句型：
1．I'd like to register to attend a course about gardening because（because引导原因状语从句） I have liked flowers and grasses since （ since 引导时间状语从句）I was a child
我想要报名参加园艺课程，因为从还是孩子的时候我就喜欢花草．
2．For another（和For one thing并列），after graduation from college，I will devote my life to（devote…to表示"奉献于"） cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state，which （which引导定语从句，代指a more beautiful state ）will attract more foreigners to visit
另外，大学毕业以后，我会全身心的种植花草来让我们的国家更美丽，吸引更多的外国人参观．

解答 Dear leader，
    I am very glad that your school will hold the English Summer Camp that contains many courses，such as gardening，cooking，self-defence，nursing and so on．（点题）
I'd like to register to attend a course about gardening because I have liked flowers and grasses since I was a child．【高分句型一】I especially like playing in the garden where I can enjoy the beauty of nature．（感兴趣的课程以及原因）
    For one thing，I hope to gain more knowledge of gardening，which can help me to major in the gardening after attending college．Besides，I can realize the bitterness of the gardeners to treasure plants more，and also，I wish to get more information about gardening so as to study it more easily when I enter university．（期望从这门课程中学到什么）For another，after graduation from college，I will devote my life to cultivating flowers and grasses to turn our country into a more beautiful state，which will attract more foreigners to visit．【高分句型二】（为什么想学这些内容）
    Looking forward to your early reply．
                                   Yours，
                                    Wang hua

点评 考查应用文中的书信的写作．提纲类短文的关键在于要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略．同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时选择高级的词汇和语法项目让文章更有文采．