题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下短文。短文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（八），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Victor was traveling through a train for his parents. All the time he is glancing with joy at his new shoes what his father had bought for him. After some time, he removed his shoes to take him a nap.
After waking up, he found one of her shoes missing. He started crying unhappy. His parents tried to comfort him. His father told him it was no use cry and promised that after reaching home, he would buy him a new pair of shoes.
Victor got very excited on hearing his father's words that he threw other shoe out of the train.
Reaching the destination, he suddenly found his losing shoe in a basket. How he regretted it!
【答案】
【1】for改成with
【2】is改成was
【3】what改为that/which
【4】去掉him
【5】her改为his
【6】unhappy改为unhappily
【7】cry改为crying
【8】very改为so
【9】other前加the
【10】losing改为lost
【解析】
【1】for改成with 考察介词。With表示“和.......”，文意是Victor和他的父母通过一辆火车旅行。
【2】is改成was 考察时态。文章时态是过去式，前后时态要保持一致，所以is改成was。文意是一路上他一直高兴的看着爸爸给他买的新鞋。
【3】what改为that/which 考察引导词。that/which引导的定语从句修饰名词shoes。
【4】去掉him考察人称代词。 take a nap是固定搭配，表示“小憩”的意思。文意是偶尔他会把脚移开休息一下。
【5】her改为his考察人称代词。人称代词使用错误。文意是当他醒来的时候，他发现一只鞋不见了。
【6】unhappy改为unhappily考察副词。unhappy是形容词，表示“高兴的”，而unhappily是副词文意是他很不高兴的哭了。cry是动词，所以要用副词修饰。
【7】cry改为crying考察动名词。it was no use doing.....表示“做某事是无用的”，文意是他的父亲告诉他哭是没用的，并承诺他回到家之后在给他买一双新鞋。
【8】very改为so考察连词。文意是他听到父亲的话以后非常兴奋。very是副词，不能修饰形容词。
【9】other前加the 考察冠词。The表示“特指”，文章中特指另外一只鞋子。文意是他把另外一只鞋子也扔出了火车。
【10】losing改为lost考察形容词。文意是到达目的地后，他发现丢失的那只鞋子在一个篮子里面，多么遗憾啊。
