Question

【题目】请阅读下面的短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。

Many people believe that in the future computers will be used in lots of everyday activities .It is thought that we won’t go shopping because many goods are available on the Internet .There will be no more books because all books will be available from electronic libraries .The Internet will be used to book holidays, rent films and order food. Most telephone calls will be made over the Internet as well .Some people are excited about these new developments .Others , however, do not think that computers will replace our present ways of shopping and communicating .

Is Internet shopping as much fun as traditional shopping ? Many people say it is not .It is fun to go into shops and look as good in person . It is also unlikely that many people will want to read large texts on our computers because paper books will possibly be more user- friendly .Maybe , computers won’t change these habits.

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括这段短文的内容；

2．然后以约120个词表达你对“网上购物”这一现象的观点。内容包括：

（1）叙述你身边的同学对网上购物的看法。

（2）你喜欢的购物方式（传统的购物方式还是网上购物）?

（3）结合自己的生活例子说明你喜欢的理由。

【写作要求】

1.作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

概括准确，语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

Possible version：

This passage mainly talks about different uses of internet shopping such as buying goods and electronic books, booking holidays, renting films and so on. It also describes different attitudes to internet shopping.

My classmates have different attitudes to internet shopping. Some think that it is very convenient to shop on line. Others believe that it is unsafe to buy goods with credit cards and it is impossible to check the quality .

As far as I’m concerned, I prefer traditional shopping. It is really fun to go into shops and look at the goods in fresh. We can choose what we really need and have a good bargain. We can talk freely with the shopkeepers instead of a cold machine. I often go shopping with my parents on weekends and we have a very good communication every time. Indeed, everything is available on line and we needn’t even leave our home. However ,we may be cheated and waste money. So traditional shopping is better than internet shopping.

【解析】

试题分析：本篇读写任务要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文，首先要用大约30个词概括所给文章的大概内容，然后用大约120个词谈谈对“网上购物”的看法，包括如下要点：(1) 身边的同学对网上购物的看法;(2) 你喜欢的购物方式(3) 你喜欢的原因等。因为属于论说性文章，所以在谋篇布局时可以考虑三段式的写作模式。而且还可以使用事例来论证自己的观点，增强文章的说服力。也可以使用文章所给内容但是不能照抄原文句子。在论述时还要使用过渡句和连接词来使文章内容具有层次性和逻辑性。此外写作时要尽量使用高级词汇和多种句式结构，比如定语从句，强调句型等等以增加文章亮点。

【亮点说明】在本篇范文中作者开头用大约30个字概括了所给文章的内容，然后提出同学们的观点：My classmates have different attitudes to internet shopping.，最后说出自己喜欢的方式和原因。这种段落安排符合论述文的要求，而且使文章结构清晰，层次分明。在语言方面作者使用了大量的复合句和短语结构，显示了作者对语言结构的把握，同时增加了文章的采分点。比如动词短语As far as I’m concerned, 高级词汇available，convenient等，总之这是一篇值得借鉴的优秀范文。