题目内容
【题目】Dear sir,
Last year I buy a refrigerator in your store on Chang An Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. And yesterday something went wrongly. Guess what! It made a noise when turning on. At first it was low but gradually it become louder and louder. To make matter worse, it even stopped working. We all felt disappointing. I am writing to ask for help.Would you please find someone to repair it? I would be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.
Li Ming
【答案】Dear sir,
Last year I a refrigerator in your store on Chang An Road. We all like shape of the refrigerator. yesterday something went . Guess what! It made a noise when on. At first it was low but gradually it louder and louder. To make worse, it even stopped working. We all felt. I am writing to ask for help. Would you please find someone to repair it? I be at home this weekend. Please call me before you come to here. My telephone number is 66065531. Thank you very much.
Li Ming
【解析】1. 根据Last year,可知句子用一般过去时态,故把buy改为bought。
2. 句意:我们都喜欢冰箱的形状。此处表示特指,在shape前加the。
3. 句意:我们都喜欢冰箱的形状,但是昨天冰箱出故障了。此处表示转折,故把And改为But。
4. 固定词组:go wrong出毛病,弄错,故把wrongly改为wrong。
5. 句意:当冰箱被关的时候,它发出噪音。此处用过去分词作时间状语,it与turn是被动关系,“被关”,故把turning改为turned。
6. 句意:起初声音低,渐渐地声音变得越来越大。前面都用过去时描述冰箱发生的事,故此处也要用过去时态,故把become改为became。
7. 动词不定式的独立成分:to make matters worse(使事情更糟糕的是),是固定短语,故把matter改为matters。
8. 句意:我们都感到失望。disappointed表示“感到失望”,disappointing表示“令人失望”,故把disappointing改为disappointed。
9. 句意:这个周末我将在家里。表示将来发生的事,句子用一般将来时态,故把would改为will。
10. here是地点副词,come here表示“来到这里”,前面不需要介词,故把here前的to去掉。