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【题目】书面表达:

假定你是李华，最近你就高中生对网络使用的情况进行了调查并写一篇报道。请根据下面的要点提示对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。

要点提示：1.主要用途；

2.出现的问题；

注意：1、词数：100字左右；

2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3、文章开头已给出，不计入字数。

As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we all know, the Internet is playing an important part in our daily life. Recently, I did a survey about how the students in my school make use of the Internet.

The students mostly use the Internet for three major purposes, among which seeking information is the most popular. They also use the Internet for communication and entertainment, such as sending and receiving e-mails, enjoying music and movies and playing on-line games. Besides, doing on-line shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.

However, I have also noticed that the Internet brings about problems to the students at the same time. Some students spend too much time playing on-line games. Worse still, unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students who get access to out of curiosity.

Thus, we can see students do need proper guidance on how to make good use of the Internet.

【解析】

试题分析：假定你是李华，最近你就高中生对网络使用的情况进行了调查并写一篇报道。请根据下面的要点提示对你的调查作简要介绍，发给报社。要点提示：1.主要用途；2.出现的问题。

写作时不要逐句翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意：1、词数：100字左右；2、可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、文章开头已给出，不计入字数。

【亮点说明】The students mostly use the Internet for three major purposes, among which seeking information is the most popular.句中使用非限制性定语从句；Besides, doing on-line shopping is gradually becoming part of their life.动名词短语作主语；However, I have also noticed that the Internet brings about problems to the students at the same time.句中运用宾语从句；Some students spend too much time playing on-line games.动名词短语作宾语；unhealthy information on the Internet does great harm to students who get access to out of curiosity. 句中再次出现定语从句；Thus, we can see students do need proper guidance on how to make good use of the Internet.疑问词加动词不定式做介词宾语；另外，Besides, However, at the same time、Worse still, Thus,在句中的运用为文章增光添彩。