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【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For example，when he bought a chocolate cake，he put them in a secret place where I couldn't find. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance，on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with housework，Mom with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】want 改为want to

【2】them改为it

【3】where改为which/that/直接去掉where

【4】eats 改为ate

【5】other改为others

【6】is 改为was

【7】making 改为made

【8】angrily 改为 angry

【9】loudly改为loud

【10】difference改为different

【解析】

【1】文中第二句。考查want的用法。sb. want to do sth.固定搭配，想要做……。

【2】文中第三句。考查上下文语境理解及代词。从when he bought a chocolate cake可知他买了一个巧克力蛋糕，故下文应该用it，单数指代上文的蛋糕。故将them改为it 。

【3】文中第三句。考查定语从句的用法。he put them in a secret place where I couldn't find.，I couldn't find.是定语从句修饰限制先行词place， 因find是及物动词，后面要跟宾语，故定语从句缺少宾语，故引导词用关系代词which/that，由于是宾语，故that可省，因此直接去掉where，也正确。

【4】文中第四句。考查时态。通篇看全文，这篇文章叙述的故事，用的是一般过去时态，故eat要用一般过去时态，故改为ate。

【5】文中第五句。考查other的用法。other后接可数名词复数，相当于对应的others，根据该句句意他从不帮助别人，可知这个other表示不止一个人，故改为others。

【6】文中第六句。考查宾语从句的用法。He said he is busy.他说他很忙，said 后接宾语从句，因为said是一般过去时，故从句也应用一般过去时，在宾语从句的句子中，除非从句是陈述一件客观事实的事，否则，从句时态要与谓语动词保持一致。

【7】文中第七句。考查句子结构分析。a game of tennis making him very busy.网球比赛使他很忙，分析句子成分可知本句没有谓语，则根据英语句法，便构不成句子，故将making 改为made。

【8】文中第八句。考查make的固定用法。He didn't care if something he did made people angrily.他不在乎他做的事是否使人们生气。make sb +形容词，还有make sb do sth.。

【9】文中第九句。考查形容词与副词辨析。on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. 在一个寒冷的夜晚，他演奏又激烈又大声的音乐直到早上4点钟。此处strong and loudly都是修饰名词music，故要用形容词loud修饰限定名词，副词主要修饰动词和形容词。

【10】文中第十句。考查系动词的用法。But he is difference now.但是现在他不同了。is 是be动词---系动词的一种，系动词用法是系动词后接名词，形容词，介词短语等。结合句意，可知，此处考查is后接形容词，表示主语的状态，故将difference改为different。