题目内容
18.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处,每处仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
Last year,my classmates and I went to London to attend the summer camp.To better understand the history and culture of the city,they scheduled a"museum trip".On a Saturday morning,we got up early and studied the map carefully work out the route.One of my classmates suggested go there by bus to enjoy the street view.It was a long ride,but when we got off the bus,we seemed to lose our ways.The streets looked busy and strangely,and we had to ask a passerby,which lived there for many years,for help.She told us the right direction and had wised us a good day.Thanks for the friendly woman,we finally got to our destination.What a wonderful experience!
分析 作者在本文中讲述了去年到伦敦夏令营时的一次迷路的经历.
解答 Last year,my classmates and I went to London to attend the summer camp.To better understand the history and culture of the city,they scheduled a"museum trip".On a Saturday morning,we got up early and studied the map carefully∧work out the route.One of my classmates suggested go there by bus to enjoy the street view.It was a long ride,but when we got off the bus,we seemed to lose our ways.The streets looked busy and strangely,and we had to ask a passerby,which lived there for many years,for help.She told us the right direction and had wised us a good day.Thanks for the friendly woman,we finally got to our destination.What a wonderful experience!
详解:
1.the改为a;考查冠词,summer camp在文中第一次出现,故用不定冠词a表示泛指.
2.they改为we;考查人称代词,结合上下文分析此处的人称代词指代前面的my classmates and I,故用we.
3.work前面加to;考查不定式,此处用不定式短语做目的状语.
4.go改为going;考查非谓语动词,动名词作宾语,suggest doing是固定结构,意为"建议做某事".
5.but改为so;考查连词;分析句意为"那是很长的一段路,所以当我们下车后我们发现迷路了"故此处不表转折,要用so表示结果.
6.ways改为way;考查固定搭配,lose one's way是固定短语,意为"迷路",way用单数形式.
7.strangely改为strange;考查形容词,此处用形容词形式与前面的busy并列作look的表语.
8.which改为who;考查关系代词,定语从句中先行词 a passerby指人,故用关系代词who在从句中做主语.
9.去掉had;考查动词的时态,此处用一般过去式wised与前面的told作并列谓语,时态保持一致.
10.for改为to;考查固定搭配,thanks to是固定短语,意为"由于",表示原因.
点评 短文改错时首先要通读全文,了解文章基本大意,然后细读短文,分析句子结构和句群关系,运用所掌握的词汇,语法,固定搭配等基础知识找出文中错误并加以修改.