题目内容
【题目】假如你准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按照要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:
1.积极锻炼;2.努力学习;3对人友善。
注意:1. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 开头已为你写好, 不计入总词数;
3. 词数:100左右。
As everyone knows, growing up healthily and happily is very important for us students.
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【答案】As everyone knows, growing up healthily and happily is very important for us students. In order to reach the goal, we must do several things.
First of all, to keep fit, we should take an active part in doing sports, such as running and playing various kinds of ball games. Taking a walk after dinner also counts. In addition, we must put our heart into study because knowledge is power. With it, we can make our country stronger and have a better future. What is the most important is that we should develop a positive and optimistic attitude towards life. Loving life and being friendly to others can ensure we live in harmony with others.
If we do these well, we can grow up healthily and happily.
【解析】本题考查提纲类作文。首先要认真审题,假定你准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按照要求写一篇短文,主要内容包括:1.积极锻炼;2.努力学习;3.对人友善。其次要确定时态,表示客观事实,所以这篇文章要使用一般现在时。然后要确定文章的结构,按照题目所给内容逐条翻译即可。在写作过程中,上下文意思要连贯,符合逻辑关系,一定要契合题目所给出的信息,不要出现偏题问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有文采。词数控制在100左右。
【亮点说明】这篇短文使用了一些高级句型。In addition, we must put our heart into study because knowledge is power.这里含有一个原因状语从句。What is the most important is that we should develop a positive and optimistic attitude towards life. 这里含有一个主语从句和一个表语从句。