题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华,你学校刚刚成立了太极社团,请给对中国武术感兴趣的交换生John写封邮件邀请他加入,内容包括:
1. 练习太极的好处;
2. 报名方式及截止日期;
3. 表示愿意进一步提供帮助。
注意:1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇:太极社团Tai Chi Club; 武术:martial arts
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【答案】Dear John,
I’m writing to inform you that a Tai Chi Club has newly been founded in our school. Learning you are enthusiastic about Chinese martial arts, I sincerely invite you to join in.
As is known to all, Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective way of keeping fit. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi can benefit us with mental relaxation and physical fitness. If you want to join the club, please fill in the form I sent to you. Remember the registration deadline is May 31, 2018. If you need any more help, please don’t hesitate to contact me.
Looking forward to your early reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封信。
第1步:根据提示可知,本篇为一封电子邮件;给对中国武术感兴趣的交换生John写封邮件邀请他加入校刚刚成立了太极社团,时态应为一般现在时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),Tai Chi Club, Chinese martial arts,mental relaxation and physical fitness,registration deadline等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
【亮点说明】
范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如I’m writing to inform you that a Tai Chi Club has newly been founded in our school. Tai Chi is not only an ancient martial art, but has also been widely acknowledged as an effective way of keeping fit. Famous for its graceful and well-balanced movements, Tai Chi can benefit us with mental relaxation and physical fitness.等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩