题目内容
3.假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处,每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
注意:
1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词.
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
The United States,locating in North America,is the fourth largest country in the world.When this land first became the nation,after winning its independence from England,it had thirteen states,each of that was represented on the American flag by a star.As the nation grow,new states added and more stars appeared on the flag.
Indians were the first inhabitants (居民) of the land.And there are still a great many descendants (后代) of Indians live in all parts of the country today.Therefore,most Americans are descendants of immigrant from all over the world.That's because the US is known for its diverse of culture.
分析 本文主要介绍美国的历史.它坐落于北美,是世界第四个国家,最先只有十三个州,后来才扩大到五十个州.大多数美国人是全世界移民的后代,这就是为什么美国以它的文化多样性著称.
解答 The United States,locating in North America,is the fourth largest country in the world.When this land first became the nation,after winning its independence from England,it had thirteen states,each of that was represented on the American flag by a star.As the nation grow,new states∧added and more stars appeared on the flag.
Indians were the first inhabitants (居民) of the land.And there are still a great many descendants (后代) of Indians live in all parts of the country today.Therefore,most Americans are descendants of immigrant from all over the world.That's because the US is known for its diverse of culture.
详解:
1.locating改为located 考查过去分词.be located in意为"…坐落于",是固定搭配.
2.the改为a 考查冠词.nation是可数名词,单数形式前用不定冠冠词a表示泛指.
3.that改为which 考查定语从句.分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句,先行词states在从句中作介词of的宾语,用关系代词which.
4.grow改为grew 考查动词时态.根据句意:随着这个国家的成长.指过去的情况,用一般过去时.
5.加were 考查动词语态.states与add之间是动宾关系,用一般过去时的被动语态.
6.live改为living 考查现在分词.Indians与live之间是主谓关系,用现在分词短语living in all parts of the country today作后置定语.
7.Therefore改为However 考查副词.however表示转折,尤其用于谈及一个既成事实时,表示转折,其意为"可是""仍然"等.可放在句首、句中或句末,通常用逗号与句子其他成分隔开.
8.immigrant改为immigrants 考查名词复数.immigrant是可数名词,表示不止一个移民,用复数形式.
9.because改为why 考查连忙.根据句意:这就是为什么美国以它的文化多样性著称.用连词why.
10.diverse改为diversity 考查名词.形容词性物主代词its后接名词,形容词diverse的名词是diversity.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
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