Question

4．最近我校对高一学生入学一学期后的学习生活适应情况做了一个调查，情况如下．请你用英语表达下表的调查结果，并提出个人观点．
要求：1．词数120左右；    2．文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数．
参考词汇：course 课程；benefit对…有益；stressful 有压力的

60%左右的学生认为	40%左右的学生认为	我的观点
1．高中学习很有压力； 2．科目难度大，课后作业多； 3．没时间参加锻炼等活动	1．适应并喜欢高中生活； 2．课程更有趣，活动更丰富，受益匪浅．	…

Recently，a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．

Answer 1

分析 写好图表式作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提纲，写作首要分析用什么时态．本文要求写一个高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查，通常用一般现在时．有2个观点，用they做主语，和自己的看法用I做主语．注意用一些高级词汇和短语和以及较复杂的句式．开头的变化和句子的连贯性也很重要．最后还要注意字数的控制．
本文分三段写出了高一学生的学习生活适应情况调查．文中用了Firstly，Besides列出2条原因．接下来，用On the contrary，开头，提出另一个观点．As far as I'm concerned，提出个人观点．
亮点句型一：Recently a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．最近我们学校进行了一项调查，是否新生已经习惯了高中生活．这是一个同位语从句，要解释说明的名词是survey，句子whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school是调查的内容．
亮点句型二：The reason is that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful，which surely benefit them a lot．原因是他们觉得课程更有趣，活动更丰富多彩，这肯定会使他们受益很多．这是一个包括表语从句和非限制性定语从句的复杂句，其中 that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful是一个表语从句；which surely benefit them a lot是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代前边整个主句的意思．

解答 Recently a survey has been carried out in our school whether the freshmen have become used to the life in senior high school．（亮点句型一）
As can be seen from result of the survey，opinions are divided．About 60% students in Senior 1 hold the opinion that life in senior high school is far from relaxing．The reasons are as follows．Firstly，the subjects they are learning now are obviously more difficult．Besides，they have to do endless homework，which leaves them little time for exercise and other activities．【一些学生的观点】
On the contrary，others say that they have become used to the new life and have begun to enjoy it．The reason is that they find the courses are more interesting and the activities are more colorful，which surely benefit them a lot．（亮点句型二）【另一些学生的观点】

点评 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．