题目内容
根据下面提供的背景和要求,写一篇英语短文。
你班开班会选班长,假如你想选李华,请你说出你选他的理由,不少于3点优点。
注意:
1. 词数120左右;
2. 开头已为你写好,不计入总词数。
As everyone knows , Li Hua is the best student in our class and I think he is the most suitable candidate for the monitor .
Firstly, …
As everybody knows, Li Hua is the best student in our class and I think he is the most suitable candidate for the monitor.
Firstly, he is highly intelligent and hard working. He does extremely well in his lessons and always get A’s in all his subjects. Furthermore, he is never too proud of his achievements.
Secondly, he is warm-hearted and always ready to help others. For example, last May our classmates Zhang Ming broke his legs in a basketball match and he had to stay in bed for a month. It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day. As a result, Zhang Ming was able to catch up with others in studies.
Thirdly, Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on..
Generally speaking, Li Hua is qualified to be our monitor.
【解析】
试题分析:本次写作任务是如果想选李华,请说出你选他的理由。具体到本次写作,考生要先审清题目要求,确定好作文人称、时态、写作要点、段落等基本内容。本文以第三人称为主。本文有三个要点1.支持谁;2.说明原因3.总结。明确作文的基本内容后,就是选用准确的词汇和恰当的句子来表达。
【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少,比如do well in,For example,As a result,catch up with, takes an active part in,and so on,generally speaking,be qualified to;还运用句型It was Li Hua that offered to help him with lessons every day.这句运用强调句;Li Hua takes an active part in all kinds of social activities, such as donating money to the children in the poor areas, helping the disabled and the old do whatever they need, and so on.这句运用了非谓语动词。并注意了句子的衔接如:Furthermore,Firstly,Secondly,Thirdly等等。
考点:考查应用文写作