Question

10．假定你是李华．临近春节，请给外教Lucy写封邮件，邀请她除夕夜到你家一同庆祝，体验中国传统节日的热闹．内容包括：
1．时间：2月7日下午到2月8日早上
2．活动：包饺子、看春晚（Spring Festival Gala）、贴对联（couplets）等．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．结语已为你写好．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇开放式作文，写作时不仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文．需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题．尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．
亮点句型一：We will make dumplings and have dinner together，during which my family will share some happy experiences in the whole year．我们一起包饺子，一起吃晚饭，在这期间全家分享一些快乐在这一年里．这是一个非限制性定语从句，介词+which，which指代前文中的包水饺吃饭的时候．
亮点句型二：If you are able to join，please let me know and I will wait for you at the school gate at 5 that afternoon．如果你能参加的话，请告诉我，我下午5点在校门口等你．本句中if引导的是条件状语从句．

解答 Dear Lucy，
   I'd like to invite you to come to my home on February 7th to celebrate the Spring Festival．
   It is the most important festival in our culture，and it's our tradition to have a family reunion then．We will make dumplings and have dinner together，during which my family will share some happy experiences in the whole year．（亮点句型一）After dinner，we'll watch the Spring Festival Gala，a series of well-prepared TV performances．As it will be late for you to go back that night，I will prepare a room for you．The next morning，we can put up couplets on the door which symbolize luck in China．After breakfast，my mother will drive you home．【节日的体验】
   If you are able to join，please let me know and I will wait for you at the school gate at 5 that afternoon．（亮点句型二）
   Looking forward to your reply．
                                                         Yours，
                                                         Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．