题目内容
7.文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在此处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出修改的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在其下面写出修改后的词.
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从十一处起)不计分.
On Jan 27,2012,my grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knew smoking was harmful,so she just couldn't quit.She always hid her cigarettes,hoping that I would never start smoking.My grandmother,that I loved so much,was one of my role model.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long I live,so that I don't have to go through that she did.
分析 在2012年1月27日,我的祖母死于肺癌.到那时我才知道是吸烟造成她的癌症.她知道吸烟有害,但是她戒不掉.她总是把烟藏起了,希望我永远不会吸烟.祖母是我的榜样,为了我不会经历她的痛苦,我向她保证有生之年我不会吸烟.
解答 On Jan 27,2012,my grandmother died of lung cancer at∧age of sixty.Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer.She knew smoking was harmful,so she just couldn't quit.She always hid her cigarettes,hoping that I would never start smoking.My grandmother,that I loved so much,was one of my role model.Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented.Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long∧I live,so that I don't have to go through that she did.
解析:
1.at后加the.考查冠词.固定短语at the age of 表示"在…岁的时候".
2.mainly-main.考查副词和形容词的区别.修饰名词cause用形容词main.
3.so-but.考查连词.She knew smoking was harmful表示"她知道吸烟有害",she just couldn't quit表示"她不能戒掉",所以两句之间是转折关系,所以用but连接.
4.that-who.考查定语从句.修饰先行词My grandmother,做非限制性定语从句I loved so much的宾语,用who.
5.model-models.考查名词.根据 one of my role model中的one of 可知用名词复数models.表示"我的榜样之一".
6.去掉in.考查介词.every day 表示"每天",不用介词.
7.has-had.考查谓语动词的时态.that smoking has never been invented做wish的宾语从句,用虚拟语气,表示跟过去的事实相反,用had done,所以has改为had.
8.our-my.考查代词.根据从句 that I will never smoke as long I live"有生之年我不会吸烟",可知是"我"做出的承诺,所以our改为my.
9.long后加as.考查固定短语.as long as 引导条件状语从句表示"只要".
10.that-what.考查名词性从句.引导I don't have to go through的宾语从句,做从句she did的宾语用what,表示"…的事".
点评 考查短文改错.
that 在名词性从句中,起连词的作用,在从句中不起语法功能,即不作任何成分,也不含有任何意义,引导名词性从句时,不可省略,故称:"三不".

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