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9．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行做出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上画一个钩（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
  此行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
  此行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），行右边横线上写出该加的词．
  此行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
Dear editor．
I worry about whether I can find suitable job when I                     （76）find后加上a
graduate from university because that I'm not a sociable                （77）去掉that
girl．I spent most of my own time on my study，so I have              （78）spent→spend
only a few friends．It's difficulty for me to communicate                （79）difficulty→difficult
with boys and girls．Though I try to get along well with them，（80）√
I cannot express me well．Sometimes I even don't know                  （81）me→myself
what I should speak when I am with boys or teachers．                    （82）speak→say
I have lost much chances to change my life because                          （83）much→many
of my character．I want to become a sociable girl and it is                 （84）and→but
not easy．I hope that I can get some advices from you．                     （85）advices→advice
Li Hua．

分析 本文展示的是李华向一位编辑征求意见的信；在信中，她提到由于自己很不善于交际，所以担心会在大学毕业后找不到合适的工作；信中还列举了她在日常生活中的表现以及急于改变自己性格的愿望．

解答 Dear editor．
I worry about whether I can find∧suitable job when I （76）在find之后加a
graduate from university because that I'm not a sociable （77）去掉that
girl．I spent most of my own time on my study，so I have （78）spent→spend  
only a few friends．It's difficulty for me to communicate （79）difficulty→difficult
with boys and girls．Though I try to get along well with them，（80）√
I cannot express me well．Sometimes I even don't know （81）me→myself  
what I should speak when I am with boys or teachers． （82）speak→say    
I have lost much chances to change my life because （83）much→many
of my character．I want to become a sociable girl and it is （84）and→but
not easy．I hope that I can get some advices from you． （85）advices→advice
Li Hua．

答案：
76．在find之后加a    考查不定冠词    此处用来修饰单数名词job，表示泛指"一份合适的工作"；故在find之后加a
77．去掉that     考查连接代词   that通常用来引导名词性从句，此处引导的是原因状语从句；故去掉that
78．spent→spend   考查时态   根据上下文都使用了一般现在时可知，本文描述的是作者目前的情况，故此处也应使用一般现在时，故用spend
79．difficulty→difficult   考查固定句型结构"It's difficult for sb．to do sth．"意为：对某人来说做某事很困难；故用difficult
80．√
81．me→myself   考查反身代词   此处指的是：我不能很好地表达我自己；故用myself
82．speak→say    考查动词词义辨析  本句的意思是：当我与男孩或老师们在一起时，有时我甚至不知道我应该说什么；此处强调的是说话的内容，并不强调说话的动作或说某种语言的能力；故用say
83．much→many   考查形容词   此处用来修饰复数名词chances；故用many
84．and→but       考查连词   本句的意思是：我想成为一名善于交际的女孩，但是这并不容易；此处表示转折，故用but
85．advices→advice   考查名词   由于advice是不可数名词，所以不能加s；故用advice

点评 短文改错是集语法知识与语言技能为一体的综合性试题，主要考查学生对词汇、语法和语篇三要素的把握能力．错误类型一般有：缺词、多词和错词．常见的错误有：1 词法错误，主要包括动词、名词、冠词、形容词、副词、代词和介词等词类误用、同义词混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此类试题时，需要正确分析句子成分，熟练掌握各词类的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常见句法错误．通常表现为简单句、复合句以及疑问句、祈使句、感叹句和强调句等错误．解答此类试题时，需要掌握各类句子的句式结构及意义用法．3 应在理解文章大意的前提下，进行作答．

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