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【题目】假设你是你校足球队的杨帆,你校英语报Sports栏目组邀请你为他们投稿。请用英语写一篇短文,介绍你的队友王林:
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】Wang Lin is sixteen years old, who is my teammate of the school football team. He is thin and small, and kind and friendly to others. He loves playing balls, especially football. He dreams of becoming a famous football player like David Beckham in the future.
It was two months ago that Wang Lin joined our school football team. Even if he is a newly chosen player, he plays a very important part in the whole team. Ten days ago he suffered from a bail cold, so he missed an important match. However, now he has recovered entirely and can receive the training as usual.
【解析】人物介绍作文写作技巧
在描写人物时,我们可以通过以下三个部分来写作:
第一部分:总体介绍人物,然后介绍人物的出生年月、地点、家庭背景或相貌等。 第二部分:1.列出人物的品质和个性,并以具体的事例说明其品质和个性,在选取事例时,应该选取典型事迹,抓住人物特征; 2.列举人物的主要经历、事迹或成就。
第三部分:介绍人们对人物的评价或谈论你的个人感受。
亮点分析:如本文第一段介绍了杨帆的出生年龄、身份及相貌等。在本段中使用非限制性定语从句“Wang Lin is sixteen years old, who is my teammate of the school football team.”说明其年龄。
第二段中列出杨帆的个性品质及经历。在本文中考生使用了两个非谓语,love playing dream of becoming…,,接着用一个强调句型“It was two months ago that Wang Lin joined our school football team”和状语从句“Even if he is a newly chosen player, he plays a very important part in the whole team. T”来说明个人的主要经历。
总之本文结构相对完整,能使用简单的定语从句,状语从句及强调句型,同时还运用了非谓语。语言简洁明了。