题目内容
【题目】假设你是周亮,即将从华光中学毕业。你得知某英文报社正在征文,题为“If I am a teacher, I will…”。请你给该报社投稿,内容包括:
1.你对教师这个职业的看法;
2.你会做一个什么样的教师。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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【答案】I am Zhou Liang, a graduate from Hua Guang Middle School. Since I was a little child, I have been dreaming of being a teacher. Teaching in my eyes is a good job, guiding students how to be a real human as well as offering them knowledge. Teachers are respected and honoured for their great work, which is why I want to be a teacher.
If I am a teacher, I will be strict with the students for their better results. I will well prepare my lessons and make my classes lively and interesting. Besides, I will treat my students kindly, as if they were my kids. By doing so, my students may consider the school their second home, as they stay away from their parents.
All in all, if I am a teacher, I will be a good teacher popular with all my students.
【解析】试题分析:
本文是给报社的投稿,话题为“If I am a teacher, I will…”,需要在稿件中说明你对教师这个职业的看法以及你会做一个什么样的教师。文章给出了提纲,成文时应注意以下几点:(1)内容要点齐全。 (2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态:一般将来时和一般现在时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语,使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型,以增加文章的档次。
【亮点说明】
1.使用高级句型:动名词teaching做主语,现在分词guiding做定语Teaching in my eyes is a good job, guiding students how to be a real human as well as offering them knowledge.;含有非限制性定语从句和表语从句的句子Teachers are respected and honoured for their great work, which is why I want to be a teacher.;as if引导的虚拟语气Besides, I will treat my students kindly, as if they were my kids. 2.使用了过渡词语:Besides等。3.使用了重要短语:dream of梦想;be strict with对…严格;All in all总而言之,总的来说。