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【题目】假定你是李华,你的英国好友Jonah发来邮件询问你们班上周末参观西安的情况。 请给他回一封邮件。

1. 参观时间及内容;2.发出邀请。

注意:1. 词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

参考词汇:兵马俑 the Terracotta Warriors 皮影戏 shadow play

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【答案】Dear Jonah,

I'm glad you are interested in Xi’an. Now I'd like to tell you something about our visit to Xi'an last weekend.

We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Saturday. After arriving in Xi'an, we went to visit the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people. The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays, an ancient form of Chinese storytelling. After that, we tasted some delicious local foods. I feel that I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.

Looking forward to your visiting Xi'an, I would be willing to show you around.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。本篇要求考生给朋友Jonah写一封邮件,告诉他上周末参西安的情况。

体裁:应用文

时态:根据提示,时态应以一般过去时为主

结构:总分总

要求:

1. 参观时间及内容;

2.发出邀请。

第二步:列提纲(重点词组)

be interested in/ would like to do sth./ pay a visit to/ arrive in/ look forward to/ be willing to do sth./ have a better understanding of/ show sb. around/ be glad to do sth./ be delighted to do sth

第三步:连词成句

1. I'm delighted to know you are interested in Xi'an.

2. Now I'd like to tell you something about our visit to Xi'an last weekend.

3. We set off at 7:00 a.m. on Saturday.

4. After arriving there, we paid a visit to the Terracotta Warriors, where we saw the wisdom of ancient Chinese people.

5. The following day we went out to watch some shadow plays, which is an ancient form of Chinese storytelling.

6. After that, we tasted some delicious local foods.

7. I feel I have learned a lot from the relaxing and significant experience.

8. Looking forward to your visiting Xi'an, I would be willing to show you around.

第四步:连句成篇(加入衔接词或从句)

表示并列的连词:and/but/or/so…

状语从句连词:because/ if/ though/ although…

定语从句连词:which/ that/ when/ where…

第五步:修改润色(加入高级词汇或短语)

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