Question

【题目】随着人们的生活水平越来越高，有不少人忽视了体育锻炼。你班学生就这一话题组织了一次班级讨论， 请对以下列举的体育锻炼的好处进行补充，并说说自己所喜爱的运动项目。

体育锻炼的好处	对身体有好处； 能够缓解压力； …… （至少补充两个要点）
你喜欢的运动项目	（请加以说明）

【写作要求】

1.作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

2.不必写标题；

3.词数150左右。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】Physical exercise is a necessary part of our life. However, still some people do not like to attend sports activities. They think those activities waste their time and influence their study.

Indeed, it is very unwise for people to keel distance from physical exercise. Physical exercise is very beneficial to us. First of all, attending is an effective way to relieve pressure and keep a pleasant mood. Besides, by attending physical activities, people can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their skills. Nowadays our government provides many sports facilities for our citizens to do physical exercise. People can choose freely according to their interest and needs.

As for me, I am keen on all kinds of ball games, especially football and basketball. From these games, I have gained great pleasure and made many friends. To conclude, everybody should not hesitate to attend sports activities.

【解析】随着人们的生活水平越来越高，有不少人忽视了体育锻炼。你班学生就这一话题组织了一次班级讨论，因此你需要简单介绍体育锻炼的好处并说说自己所喜爱的运动项目。

文章基本要点已经给出，但考生在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：

1.文章是要简单介绍体育锻炼的好处并说说自己所喜爱的运动项目。主体时态要用一般现在时。

2.要点要齐全。但不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文衔接的自然流畅。

3.介绍体育锻炼的好处时要简单介绍自己所喜爱的运动项目。细节把控要到位，否则会显得内容不够丰满。

【范文亮点】

优秀词汇和短语：Physical exercise 体育锻炼；keep distance from sth远离某事；be beneficial to 有益于； all kinds of各种各样的；hesitate犹豫；

优秀句式和行文脉络：

1.“ Besides, by attending physical activities, people can have chances to contact and communicate with others which can help them improve their skills. ”， which引导宾语从句,修饰others ，which在从句中作主语。

2.“Indeed, it is very unwise for people to keel distance from physical exercise.”， it is + 形容词 + for sb to do sth..译作“(某人)做某事是…的”。It 是形式主语,不定式结构是真正主语。 for后面的sb是不定式的逻辑主语。

3..文章采用了“ However、 Indeed、 First of all、Besides、To conclude”等连词，使行文更加流畅。