Question

【题目】书面表达

假如你是新华一中的学生李华，你从网上看到John在某英语俱乐部发布里一个帖子邀请各国爱好英语的学生家人该俱乐部，以加强交流，提高英语水平。请你根据一下要点提示，用英语写封电子邮件。

要点：1.简单介绍自己（如：哪国人，爱好等）

2.决定参加该俱乐部的原因（交朋友，提高英语水平）；

3.希望成为其中一员。

注意：1.词数100左右

2.可适当增加细节，是行文连贯；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear John,

I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English.I’m interested in it and want to join the club.

My name is Li Hua, a Chinese student from Xinhua No. 1 Middle School. I like English very much and have won prizes in English speech contests. I want to make full use of the chance to practise my English and speak it not only accurately but also fluently.In addition, I want to make friends with students from different countries, so that we can learn from each other to improve our English. I hope I”ll be accepted as a member of the club.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是篇邮件应用文，内容提示较简洁，只是框架，但学生容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，首先要注意文章的时态，用一般现在时和将来时。人称用第一和第二人称。再有就是不能根据材料逐字逐句的翻译应该注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。

【亮点说明】文章要点齐全，表达思路明确，知识点运用恰当到位，文中使用了非常好的短语，为文章增色不少，比如English speech contests，make full use of the chance，not only accurately but also fluently等。还运用了定语从句I’m glad to read the post on the Internet that you welcome students who like English。