Question

13．最近，你班同学就"男女生之间是否存在真正的友谊"这一话题展开讨论．请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，并简单地发表自己的看法．词数120左右．

60%的同学认为	40%的同学认为
1．男女同学之间存在真正的友谊． 2．追求友谊是人的天性（human nature）． 3．互相帮助，互相学习，共同提高	1．男女生之间不存在真正的友谊． 2．易造成早恋（fall in love at an early age）现象． 3．影响学习成绩．

Answer 1

分析 本篇写作是书信，题材是社会现象的两种不同观点．话题是男女生的友谊，这种文章一般层次比较清晰，四段：第一段为总述；第二段正方观点及依据；第三段反方观点及依据；第四段自己观点．要注意的是1．在列举双方依据时要尽量使语言多样化；2．自我观点表达时要有正确的判断，要有辩证的思维．一篇文章需要有正确的句子才能明了清晰的表达作者的意思．考生应明白高考书面表达题既不是汉译英，也不是可任意发挥的作文．它要求的是将所规定的材料内容经整理后展开思维，考查运用所学英语知识准确地表达意思的能力．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be for 支持，seek friendship追求友谊，human nature人性，On the other hand另一方面，fall in love恋爱，In my opinion以我的观点来看，
Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are for the idea that real friendship exists between them．（高分句型一）
On the other hand，40% think that there is no real friendship between boys and girls．（高分句型二）

解答 Dear editor，
    I am writing to tell you about the discussions we've had about whether real friendship exists between boy students and girl students．
    Opinions are divided on the question.60% of the students are for the idea that real friendship exists between them．（高分句型一）They believe that it is human nature to seek friendship．It helps them learn from each other and improve themselves together．
    On the other hand，40% think that there is no real friendship between boys and girls．（高分句型二）Because it can easily lead to falling in love at an early age and thus affects their study．
    In my opinion，boys and girls can develop their friendship properly．
                                                  Yours truly，
                                                    Li Hua

点评 考生应该用自己最熟悉、最有把握的词、短语及句式，按一定的逻辑顺序和意义层次完成短文，划分好文章的自然段落，注意段落之间的发展和连贯．尽量使用不同长度的句子，使句型多样化．适当使用连词，使句子间的衔接自然流畅．