假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改．增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词．删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉．修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词．注意:(1)每处错误及其修改均� 题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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19．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
（1）每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
（2）只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
When my grandfather left school，he got his first job as a office worker．In those days，he was extreme thin．He paid very little，so he could not afford to eating a lot．I have one or two photos of her from that time，and he looks just like me，but a lot thin!When he grew older，he worked at all sorts of thing，such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman．He worked hardly all his life，but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed，like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home．

分析本文主要介绍作者的爷爷．他一生都努力工作，总是找时间做他喜欢做的事情，比如：周末钓鱼或在家读书等．

解答 When my grandfather left school，he got his first job as a office worker．In those days，he was extreme thin．He∧paid very little，so he could not afford to eating a lot．I have one or two photos of her from that time，and he looks just like me，but a lot thin!When he grew older，he worked at all sorts of thing，such as reporting for a local newspaper and worked as a part-time salesman．He worked hardly all his life，but he always found out time for the things he enjoyed，like going fishing on weekends or reading books at home．
详解：
1．a改为an 考查冠词． worker是可数名词，因office读音以发元音开头，用不定冠词an表示泛指．
2．extreme改为extremely 考查副词．thin是形容词，用副词修饰．
3．加was 考查动词语态．he与pay之间是动宾关系，用一般过去时的被动语态，因主语he是单数形式，助动词用was．
4．eating改为eat 考查词语用法．can afford afford to…意为"负担得起"，"做得到"，"忍得住"，to是不定式符号，后接动词原形．
5．her改为him 考查代词．him指代文中my grandfather．
6．thin改为thinner 考查形容词比较级．根据句意：他看起来像我，但比我瘦点．用thinner．
7．thing改为things 考查名词复数．thing是可数名词，其前有all sorts of修饰时用复数形式．
8．worked改为working 考查动名词．and是并列连词，它前后连接两个相同的语法成分，reporting for a local newspaper和working as a part-time salesman都是动名词短语．
9．hardly改为hard 考查词语用法．hardly意为"几乎不"，hard意为"努力地"，此处应是后者．
10．去掉out 考查词语用法．find out意为"发现，看穿，揭发"，find意为"找到"，此处应是：找到．

点评高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．