Question

【题目】It goes without saying that English plays an important role in our modern society.English is an international language.Wherever you go，you can hear English spoken by many people.From this point of view，it is true that English is important to our daily life.

Learning English is like learning to swim or learning to play ball.We are like the man who thinks he can learn to swim only by reading books about swimming.In fact，we learn by doing.The grammatical rules are valuable as we need some assistance.In the same way，advanced instructions about swimming are helpful as we learn something from actual experience in the water.But reading books never makes a swimmer and learning rules never makes a practical linguist.The regular procedure in learning English involves listening first，to be followed by speaking.Then comes reading，and finally the writing of the language.The way you learn English is much the same as the way you learned your own language.First of all you must listen and then repeat and repeat until you can use the language easily.In other words，you have to build up language habits in English just as you build up English habits in your own language.

To sum up，we must bear in mind that nobody can learn to swim for you.Nobody can learn to play ball for you.Nobody can learn English for you.It’s up to you.You must learn for yourself and you will learn if you really want to and are willing to practice.

写作内容

1．用约30个单词写出上文概要；

2．用约120个单词就“如何学习英语”这个主题发表你的看法，至少包含以下内容要点：

(1)中国人学习英语很不容易；

(2)你学习英语的方法；

(3)学好英语贵在坚持。

写作要求

1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3．不必写标题。

评分标准

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】English is an international language，which plays an important role in our modern society.Learning English is like learning to swim or learning to play ball.We must practice a lot.

To a Chinese，learning English well is not easy.But I managed to overcome the difficulties.The spelling and meaning of words may be the first difficulty.But I found my own way to deal with them.As to spelling，I never copied a word again and again to remember it，but tried to find its relevance to the sound.As to the meaning，I often put the word into the sentence to learn its meaning.Grammar may be another difficulty.But I’ve also got it over by learning the grammatical rules and then spending much time reading the articles written in English.

Overcoming all these difficulties requires perseverance.Perseverance is an important reason why I can learn English well.

【解析】本文属于读写任务写作，动笔前，一定要认真阅读原文，并理解内容。认真看清题目要求，这篇书面表达给了一段材料：先要求以约30个词概括上文的主要内容，要求有很高的概括提炼的能力，要抓住文章的主题，本文主要讲了英语是一门国际语言，在现代生活中扮演着重要角色，学习英语经常练习非常重要。再以约120个词写一篇短文，按照要点去表达，不能有遗漏，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。写作时尽量使用自己会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。

【亮点说明】这篇范文要点全面，语言精炼，简单句和复杂句交叉使用：如English is an international language，which plays an important role in our modern society.这里使用了非限制性定语从句；spending time doing sth. 这个句型使用的非常好。