Question

12．目前，越来越多的中学生利用周末上各种各样的培训班或请家教．对于这一现象，存在两种不同观点：

有些人认为有必要	另一些人认为没有必要
跟老师学比自己学好 可以巩固课堂所学内容 可以学到更多的东西	容易养成依赖习惯 学生需要时间休息 许多培训班和家教以赢利为目的

请您根据以上提示，以Is a Training Class of Family Teacher Necessary？为题，写一篇120词左右的短文，反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点．文章开头已给出，不计入总字数．
要求：层次清晰，连贯流畅；表达灵活，不要逐字逐句翻译．
参考词汇：巩固strengthen；
Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．
In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇话题类作文，短文标题、开头及写作要点已经给出，我们所要做的就是根据题目内容写一篇英文短文．由于题干给出的要点比较简洁，所以需要对要点进行扩展．题目中的要点都要提到，缺一不可．要反映表中内容，并简要阐述自己的观点．另外，要注意不要偏离文章中心，写作时注意层次清晰，连贯流畅；
【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语from time to time时不是；in one's opinion在某人看来；be interested in对．感兴趣；Firstly，it is more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．这个句子it做形式主语，真正的主语是后面的不定式；What is more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．这个句子运用到不定式做表语；In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends这个句子运用到whether引导主语从句；

解答 Is a Training Class or Family Teacher Necessary？
       More and more middle school students are going to all kinds of training classes or having family teachers at the weekend．There are two different viewpoints about it．
      Some thinks it necessary．Firstly，it's more effective to study with a teacher than by themselves．Secondly，it can strengthen what is learnt in class．（高分句型一）Besides，they can learn a lot more．Others think it unnecessary．For one thing，students can easily form the habit of dependence．For another，students need time to relax from time to time．What's more，the purpose of many training classes and teachers is to make money．（高分句型二）
       In my opinion，whether a training class or family teacher is needed just depends．If you are really very weak at or interested in a certain subject，maybe it's OK for you．But be sure to choose a good and suitable class or teacher，otherwise it would be a waste of time and money．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．