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【题目】假设你是育才一中的学生会主席李华，你从网上新闻得知2016年诺贝尔文学奖得主Bob Dylan要来中国。你们学校准备在2017年1月1日上午8:00—10:00在学校会议厅举办一次主题为“音乐与文学”的英语演讲比赛，来自各个年级的十位优秀学生将会参赛。请你代表学校学生会写一封电子邮件，邀请他来做评委。

写作内容要点如下：

1. 表明写信目的；

2. 介绍演讲比赛相关信息(如时间，地点，主题，参赛人员等)；

3. 期待他接受邀请。

注意：1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实、连贯。

3. 字数：100字左右

提示词：诺贝尔文学奖 Nobel Prize in Literature 评委 judge 会议厅 conference room

英语演讲比赛 English Speaking Competition

Dear Bob Dylan,

I’m very glad to know from the online news that you will visit China soon.________________

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Bob Dylan,

I’m very glad to know from the online news that you will visit China soon. I'm Li Hua, the Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai No.1 Middle School. Knowing that you are the winner of 2016 Nobel Prize in Literature, I can’t wait to invite you to be the judge at our English Speaking Competition.

The English Speaking Competition will be held in our school on January 1st, 2017. You can enjoy the wonderful competition from 8:00 a.m. to 10:00 a.m. in the school conference room. Much to our delight, ten excellent students from each grade will deliver their speeches on the given topic “Music and Literature”, which is sure to leave you a deep impression.

We sincerely hope that you will accept our invitation. It will be thrilling if you show up and perform your favorite songs.

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：假设你是育才一中的学生会主席李华，你从网上新闻得知2016年诺贝尔文学奖得主Bob Dylan要来中国。你们学校准备在2017年1月1日上午8:00—10:00在学校会议厅举办一次主题为“音乐与文学”的英语演讲比赛，来自各个年级的十位优秀学生将会参赛。请你代表学校学生会写一封电子邮件，邀请他来做评委。写作内容要点如下：1. 表明写信目的；2. 介绍演讲比赛相关信息(如时间，地点，主题，参赛人员等)；3. 期待他接受邀请。注意：1.文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。2. 可适当增加细节，使文章内容充实、连贯。3. 字数：100字左右

【亮点说明】本文是一篇电子邮件，采用三段式，内容齐全，句子衔接紧密，布局合理，使用高级句子。I’m very glad to know from the online news that you will visit China soon.that引导的同位语从句用在句中；I'm Li Hua, the Chairman of the Student Union of Yucai No.1 Middle School.同位语使用恰当；Knowing that you are the winner of 2016 Nobel Prize in Literature, I can’t wait to invite you to be the judge at our English Speaking Competition.现在分词做时间状语；The English Speaking Competition will be held in our school on January 1st, 2017.谓语部分是一般将来时态的被动语态；“Music and Literature”,which is sure to leave you a deep impression.which引导非限制性定语从句；It will be thrillingif you show up and perform your favorite songs. 条件句运用巧妙。