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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Yesterday morning, I heard a piece of news which my friend Li Lei was admitted to the hospital because of the car accident. The day before yesterday, Li Lei is going to a bookstore to buy a book. He was very carefully when he got to the crossroads. He crossed the street when the traffic light turned to green. However, if he just went to the middle of the street, a car suddenly appeared at his right-hand side and came directly towards him. The driver drove fast and it was too late to avoiding it. Li Lei was knocked by the car. She was carried to the hospital immediately and had a surgery. Last night, I visited him. He looked pale unless he was out of danger.

Answer 1

【答案】1.第一句: which改为that

2.car前的the 改为 a

3.第二句: is 改为 was

4.第三句: carefully改为careful

5.第四句: 去掉to

6.第五句: if 改为when

7.第六句: avoiding改为avoid

8.第七句: knocked ∧ by 加 down

9.第八句: She改为He

10.第十句: unless改为although/though

【解析】文章详细描述了李雷遭遇车祸的经过及结果。

1. 第一句：which改为that.考查同位语从句。句中从句是news的同位语从句用that引导解释说明news的内容，不用which，故which改为that。

2. car前的the改为a.考查冠词。此处指一次车祸，而不是特指，用不定冠词，故the改为 a。

3. 第二句：is 改为 was.考查时态。根据时间状语The day before yesterday可知用过去时，此处是过去将来时，故is改为was。

4. 第三句：carefully改为careful. 考查形容词。用于动词be之后作表语用形容词不用副词，故 carefully改为careful。

5. 第四句：去掉to. 考查动词。turn作系动词，表示“转变”，后加形容词作表语。在这里指交通灯变绿要用turn作系动词；而turn to意为“转向，求助于”，不符合此处意思，故去掉to。

6. 第五句：if 改为when.考查连词。句意：然而，当他走到道路中央时，一辆车突然从右边出现朝着他冲过来。此处表示时间不是假设，故if 改为when。

7. 第六句：avoiding改为avoid. 考查动词形式。此处是too…to句型，表示“太……而不能”。 to后用动词原形，故avoiding改为avoid。

8. 第七句：knocked ∧ by 加 down .考查动词短语。knock down意为“击倒，撞倒”，此处指李雷被车撞倒。故knocked ∧ by 加 down。

9. 第八句：She改为He. 考查代词。文章的主人公是李雷，全文用he指代，故She改为He。

10. 第十句：unless改为although/though.考查连词。句意：尽管他脱离了危险但看起来很苍白。此处表示转折不是条件，故unless改为although/though。