题目内容
【题目】假设你叫Jessie,你的加拿大笔友James 想了解一下你将要参加的2007年全国中学生英语冬令营的有关信息,请你根据下面的海报给他写一封信,谈谈有关情况和活动意义,并邀请他参加你们的活动。回信的日期:2007-12-10
注意:1.书信必须包括以上提供的内容要点,可以适当增加细节,使内容连贯;
2.词数:100字左右;
参考词汇:表演 : performance n.
英语冬令营:English Winter Camp
英语演讲比赛:English speaking competition
【答案】
Dear James,
Nice to hear from you again! As you know, this winter vacation, at the end of December, 2007, we English-lovers from all over the country will go to a four-day English Winter Camp in Dalian. Some English teachers from China, the USA, England and Australia will join us. In the camp, we will have an English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Dalian. Besides, we will exchange our English learning experience and talk about our colorful school life in English. I think this winter camp will greatly improve my spoken English and I will make some new friends there. I do hope you will come and join us.
Best wishes,
Yours sincerely,
Jessie
【解析】
试题分析:本篇书面表达属于书信类书面表达,根据提示信息的具体情况来行文。写作时注意以下几点:1、仔细阅读有关提示,弄清试题提供的所有信息,明确有哪些要点。2、分析文章的总体框架,要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象,覆盖所有内容要点。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态。4.注意使用高级词汇和句式,以增加文章的亮点。
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,层次分明,而且使用了多种句式和结构。过去分词given做后置定语修饰performances. we will have an English speaking competition, watch some wonderful performances given by the students and visit some places of interest in Dalian.此外,文章还使用了大量短语hear from, at the end of, make some new friends等。使用连词Besides使文章内容更具有层次感,也使语言更加连贯。