Question

6．假设你是高一学生李华，将要参加学校的英语演讲比赛．你要演讲的题目是"How to Improve Our Physical（身体的） and Mental（心理的） Health"．请综合以下其他同学提出的意见并加以补充，写一篇演讲稿．
注意：1．词数100左右；
  2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Zhou Yonglin：Having more fruit and vegetables can make us healthy．
WangFang：If we want to be physically healthy，we should do regular exercise．
Liu Xu：Talking with friends and traveling a lot can take mental health issues away from us．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs．
我们可以吃水果和蔬菜，这些富含人体所需的维生素．
高分句型二：
Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy．
与朋友交谈和阅读一本好书是伟大的方式做到这一点．无论你做什么，只记得保持快乐．

解答 How to Improve Our Physical and Mental Health
Boys and girls，what do you think are the most important things in the world？As far as I am concerned，health is the certainly among them．Today，I'd like to talk about keeping healthy．
To have a healthy body，we must pay attention to what we eat．We can have fruit and vegetables，which are full of the vitamins that our body needs（高分句型一）．For food that is high in fat，such as meat，we should have some，but not too much．Meanwhile，regular exercise plays an important role in physical health．
Besides physical health，we also need to keep a positive frame of mind．Talking with friends and reading a good book are great ways to do this．Whatever you do，just remember to keep happy（高分句型二）．
These things are easy to say．What we need is a strong will and to keep doing them．
That's all．
Thank you．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．