Question

10．请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．
Every year，when new school year begins，many Chinese parents of freshmen（大学一年级新生） insist on accompanying their children to universities．Other than proudly witnessing the moment when their children step into universities，parents insist that they should assist with any unexpected problems their children might face．
In order to teach incoming freshmen their first lesson in independence，Tsinghua University has set up a"parents-restricted"area where students have to go through the enrollment （入学）procedure all by themselves．On social networking sites like www．renren．com，students are inviting their peers to go to university together，not only for safety，but also to avoid parents'overprotection．
写作内容
1．用约30个单词概括上述信息的主要内容；
2．用约120个单词阐述你对"家长送孩子上大学"这一现象的看法，并用2～3个理由或论据支撑你的看法．
写作要求
1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；
2．作文中不能直接出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3．不必写标题．
Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions
除此之外，对于新大学生去邀请同行的旅伴是个不错的主意．
高分句型二：
Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved．
因此，父母越少陪伴他们会越好，学生会变得更加独立，他们的社交能力会有所提高．

解答 Every year，there are many freshmen in China who are accompanied by their parents to college enrollment．However，Tsinghua University and some social networking sites encourage students to go it alone or with their peers．
In my opinion，it's unnecessary for parents to follow their children to universities．Children shouldn't be spoiled and letting them enroll alone is a good opportunity to develop their self-reliance ability．After all，they have to learn to e independent and take care of themselves when they are far away from their parents．Besides，it's a good idea for new college students to invite their peers as their travelling companions（高分句型一）．Chances are that they will make friends with each other．Therefore，the fewer accompanying parents there are，the better，so students will become more independent and their social skills will be improved（高分句型二）．As for parents，they are expressing their true love when they let their children go．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．