题目内容
【题目】假定你是你校学生会主席李华,一个来自英国的中英传统文化交流团到你校进行为期一周的传统文化交流。其中有一项活动是邀请他们参加由著名专家王教授到你校所作的关于中国刺绣的讲座。请你就有关事项给 他们写一封邮件,邀请他们参加。要点如下:
1. 自我介绍,表示欢迎;
2. 讲座的主题及意义;
3. 讲座的时间,地点;
4. 其它事项。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
参考词汇: 刺绣embroidery ;手工艺品handicraft
Dear respected friends,
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Student Union
Li Hua
【答案】Dear respected friends,
Welcome to our school. I am Li Hua, chairman of the Student Union. I am honored to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese traditional culture with us.
Firstly, the theme of the lecture is Chinese Embroidery, a world-famous traditional handicraft, which is significant to your better understanding of our traditional culture. Besides, the lecture by professor Wang, an expert in Chinese embroidery, is scheduled to be held in Lecture Hall 102 from 2:30 p.m.to 5:30 p.m.tomorrow. Lastly, you can ask him some questions and have a discussion with us after the lecture and you can call me at 13575862212, if you have any questions.
In brief, it is my sincere hope that you can have an unforgettable time. Looking forward to your reply.
Student Union
Li Hua
【解析】
本文属于应用文。要求写一封邀请信。
第一步:审题
体裁:应用文
时态:根据提示,时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构:总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说,把支持句作为分说,并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求:1.表达欢迎
2.告知讲座的相关情况
1)此次讲座的大体介绍。(introduction to this lecture)
2)讲座的时间和地点。(the time and place of the lecture)
第二步:列提纲 (重点词组)
am honored to; attend a lecture; Chinese traditional culture; the theme of; is significant to; is scheduled to; have a discussion with; In brief; look forward to
第三步:连词成句
1. I am honored to invite you to attend a lecture on Chinese traditional culture with us.
2. The theme of the lecture is Chinese Embroidery.
3. The lecture is scheduled to be held in Lecture Hall.
4. You can have a discussion with us.
5. Looking forward to your reply.
根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步:连句成篇(衔接词)
1.表文章结构顺序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last
2.表并列补充关系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,
3.表转折对比关系:However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause(从句), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…
4.表因果关系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result
连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,
第五步:润色修改