题目内容
5．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths．My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university．He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true．I work really hard，often study late into the night!I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does．My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades．It's not fair!
The only thing I like it is art．My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year．When I told my dad，all he said was，"You mustn't waste your time in art．You must focus your mind on your lessons!"
I'm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out？
Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely，
Lisa．
分析 改错题要注意代词，连词以及词性、人称的转化．
做好短文改错题，可以从以下三方面去考虑：1．快速阅读短文，如抓住中心思想，从整体上对短文有个了解． 2．充分运用语言的基础知识，从句型结构、词的变化、词类选择、词的搭配、习惯用法出发，进行分析判断，尽快找出错误在何处． 3．重视整体和语境，从上下文关系中找出表达连接关系或逻辑关系的词或词组，判断是递进关系还是转折关系，是因果关系还是让步关系．
解答 Dear Mandy，
I'm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths．My dad says I must try hard because he
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wants me∧go to university．He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true．I work really hard，often study late into
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the night!I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does．
says as
My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent grades．It's not fair!
but
The only thing I like it is art．My teacher says I'm the best student she's had for year．When I told my
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dad，all he said was，"You mustn't waste your time in art．You must focus your mind on your lessons!"
on/over
I'm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out？
puzzled
Thanks a lot!
Yours sincerely，
Lisa．
1．especial-especially especial为形容词，意为"突出的、特别的"，一般作定语或表语而especially为副词，意为"甚至、尤其、特别"表示突出强调，该句意为"我在学校学习不好，尤其是数学"，故应使用especially对in maths进行强调；
2．go前加to"想要某人干某事"，常用搭配want sb．to do sth．，want后跟不定式做宾补，故go前加to；
3．study-studying 考查非谓语动词作状语，主句主语I与study存在逻辑上的主谓关系，故此处应用study的现在分词形式studying作work hard的伴随状语；
4．said-says 由频度副词always"总是、一直"可知，此处应该使用一般现在时，又因为主语为第三人单数，故谓语用says；
5．like-as 该句意为"她总是说我应该像哥哥一样努力学习"，表达"像…一样、和…一样"，应使用固定搭配as…as…，故like应改为as；
6．and-but My brother doesn't study very hard与he always gets excellent grades为转折而非并列关系，故应将and改为but；
7．like后的it去掉 该句中I like是thing的定语从句，引导词that作like的宾语已经省略，不能再出现it作宾语，故去掉it；
8．year-years for years为固定搭配，意为"好多年、多年"；
9．in-on/over waste time on/over sth为固定搭配，意为"在某事上浪费时间"，故in应改为on/over；
10．puzzling--puzzled puzzling意为"令人疑惑的"而puzzled为"感到迷惑的"，该句意为"我非常疑惑，不知自己该怎么办"，所以应用puzzled．
点评 考生在做题时需理清文章的事理，注意词性、语态、时态的转换，分析句子结构
