Question

17．请按下列提示，用英语写一篇短文．
假如你是某家英文报社的编辑，昨日收到一位中学生读者王丽的来信．请根据来信内容和所给的要点提示用英语写一封回信．词数100左右．
Dear Editor，
I am a hardworking girl and want to be the number one in my class．But in the exams，I always make mistakes that I should have avoided．I really worry about it．What can I do to improve my performance in exams？
Wang Li
提示：
1．不要压力太大；
2．如有问题，请教老师或同学；
3．考试时合理分配时间并尽量抽出几分钟检查．
注意：
1．可以适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
2．书信的开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数．
参考词汇：分配-distribute
Dear Wang Li，
It's good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams．
                          

Answer 1

分析 （高分句型一）try to learn from the errors you've made in the past exams and avoid making the same mistakes again．
该句里 you've made in the past exams 是一个定语从句，修饰先行词errors，省略关系代词that，
（高分句型二）while taking an exam，distribute your time properly according to the number of questions．
首先while引导一个时间状语从句，省略you are，主从句主语一直可以省略从句主语；句意为根据问题的数量，合理分配时间；
高级词汇：distribute分配；avoid doing避免做；review复习；so as to 为了；
在列举的时候，使用了过渡词，如First of all、Secondly、Thirdly、Besides、Last but not least．

解答 Dear Wang Li，
      It is good that you know what prevents you achieving satisfying scores in exams．Here are some of my suggestions on how to improve your performance．（提出具体建议）
      First of all，don't put too much pressure on yourself．Even a very great person can make mistakes sometimes．Secondly，（高分句型一）try to learn from the errors you've made in the past exams and avoid making the same mistakes again．Thirdly，（高分句型二）while taking an exam，distribute your time properly according to the number of questions．Besides，spare a few minutes to review your paper so as to spot the silly mistakes and correct them．Last but not least，form a good learning habit and enjoy the challenge each new exam brings．
      I hope these suggestions can be of help to you．May you succeed!

点评 这是一封回信，内容贴近学生的学习生活，是学生在平时的学习生活中会遇到的情况，考生有话可说．要求学生围绕如何提高成绩，如何避免不该出现的错误提出适当的建议，学生要紧扣主题，根据自身的学习经历，提出切实可行的建议，运用高级词汇，穿插连接词和灵活运用各种句型．