Question

6．此题要求改正所给短文中的错误．对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√），如果有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：
该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉，在该行右边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉．
该行缺一个词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词．
该行错一个词：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词．
注意：原行没有错的不要改．
Once there was a farmer who has a dog of his own．      66．had
One day he went his friend's party．At the party，67．went后面加to
he met an old friend of him．They talked a lot and         68．his
then had a good drink of wine．They drank too many      69．much
and soon got drunk．Before the party when the farmer     70．After
returned back home，he became so drunk that he vomited 71．去掉back
what he had eaten．The dog ate up what its owner had      72．√
vomited．After a while，a dog became drunk，too．Now  73．the
neither the dog or its owner could stand up and they lay      74．nor
down side by side on the ground but soon both fell asleep    75．and．

Answer 1

分析 本文讲述了一个有趣的故事．一位农民养了一条狗，一天，他去参加一个聚会，遇到一位老朋友，然后就喝醉了，回家后由于醉得厉害就把吃的东西都吐出来了，他的狗把他吐的东西吃光了，也醉了．主人和狗都站不起来了，他们并肩躺在了地上，一会就睡着了．

解答 Once there was a farmer who has a dog of his own．   66． had
One day he went∧his friend's party．At the party，67． went后面加to
he met an old friend of him．They talked a lot and     68． his
then had a good drink of wine．They drank too many  69． much
and soon got drunk．Before the party when the farmer 70． After
returned back home，he became so drunk that he vomited   71． 去掉back
what he had eaten．The dog ate up what its owner had    72．√
vomited．After a while，a dog became drunk，too．Now   73． the
neither the dog or its owner could stand up and they lay   74． nor
down side by side on the ground but soon both fell asleep  75． and．

66．has改为had；考查动词的时态，句子的时间状语为once（曾经），讲述的是过去的事情，所以要用过去时态．
67．went后面加to；go是不及物动词，跟宾语时后面要加上介词to．
68．him改为his；考查代词，句子中的of后面要加一个范围，a friend of his中his是名词性物主代词，相当于his friends，这是一种双层所有格形式，意为"他的朋友当中的一个朋友"．
69．many改为much；考查副词，这里much用作副词，修饰动词drank．
70．Before改为After；考查介词，结合上下文分析，句意应为"晚会之后这位农民回到家里…"可知这里应是After．
71．去掉back；考查动词return的用法，return意为"返回，回来"，本身含有back的意思，加上back后意义重复，所以这里要去掉back．
72．正确．
73．a改为the；考查冠词，此处用the表示特指，特指上文提到的那只狗．
74．or改为nor；考查固定搭配，neither…nor…是固定搭配，意为"既不…也不…"．
75．but改为and；考查连词，分析句意应为"这条狗和它的主人并肩躺在了地上，很快就睡着了"，可知此处应为并列关系，故用and．

点评 在这篇短文改错当中，首先要从整体掌握短文大意，结合上下文语境并充分运用平时掌握的基础知识，习惯用法，短语搭配等对短文进行分析，以便找出文中的错误所在．