题目内容
19.Dear Sir,I'm writing to tell you that I'm interesting in the summer camp in Australia and I hope I can be become a member.
My name is Li nan,a 18-year-old girl from Shanxi,China,but I'm a senior student.As a student,I learned English for eight year.And I can communicate with foreigners in English free.What you know,I am a senior student now,and I know China well.I can introduce Chinese culture to foreign friends.I hope I can be accepting.
I'm looking forward to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Nan.
分析 本文是一封书信,叙述了作者想要参加一个去澳大利亚的夏令营的事情.信中介绍了自己的优势-英语不错,可以向外国朋友介绍中国文化,希望尽快收到答复.
解答 Dear Sir,
I'm writing to tell you that I'm interesting in the summer camp in Australia and I hope I can be become a member.
My name is Li nan,a 18-year-old girl from Shanxi,China,but I'm a senior student.As a student,I∧learned English for eight year.And I can communicate with foreigners in English free.What you know,I am a senior student now,and I know China well.I can introduce Chinese culture to foreign friends.I hope I can be accepting.
I'm looking forward to receive your reply as soon as possible.
Yours,
Li Nan.
详解:
1.interesting改为interested 考查固定搭配.be interested in意为"对…感兴趣",主语通常指人.
2.去掉be 或become 考查词语用法.be和become重复,所以要去掉一个.
3.a改为an 考查冠词.18(eighteen)在元音音素前要用不定冠词an.
4.but改为and 考查连词.前后两个单句是并列关系,而非转折关系,用连词and.
5.加have 考查动词时态.根据句中时间状语for eight years,要用现在完成时态,因主语是I,助动词用have.
6.year改为years 考查名词复数.year是可数名词,前面有数词eight修饰时用复数.
7.free改为freely 考查副词.communicate是动词,用副词修饰.
8.What改为As 考查连词.根据句意:正如你所知道的,我现在是高中生.as引导定语从句,先行词是后面整个句子.
9.accepting改为accepted 考查动词语态.由上下文可知,作者希望被接受,要用情态动词的被动语态.
10.receive改为receiving 考查动名词.to是介词,后接动词时用动名词形式.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
A. | lead to | B. | result from | C. | bring out | D. | set out |