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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写上该加的词．
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
Last summer I had a chance to visit Paris．That attracted me most was the Eiffel Tower，where has become a symbol of France．I was deeply impressed by their height．I have never seen such tall building before!It is made of iron and it is about 7000tons heavy．There have 1711steps from the bottom to the top．Climb the tower made me very tired，but I was very exciting．I took a lot of photo in Paris．
I have much memories and experiences to share．I will remember my trip to the France forever!

分析 本文主要介绍作者参观法国的埃菲尔铁塔，知道了它的高度，重量，虽然爬上去很累，但给作者留下了许多美好的回忆．

解答 Last summer I had a chance to visit Paris．That attracted me most was the Eiffel Tower，where has become a symbol of France．I was deeply impressed by their height．I have never seen such∧tall building before!It is made of iron and it is about 7000tons heavy．There have 1711steps from the bottom to the top．Climb the tower made me very tired，but I was very exciting．I took a lot of photo in Paris．
I have much memories and experiences to share．I will remember my trip to the France forever!
1．That改为What 考查连词．此处为主语从句，主语从句缺少主语且指物，用what引导主语从句，that引导主语从句的时候，不作成分．
2．where改为which 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词the Eiffel Tower在从句中作主语，用关系代词which．
3．their改为its 考查代词．its指代the Eiffel Tower．
4．such后加a 考查冠词．building是可数名词，此处泛指"这么高的一栋建筑"，前面加不定冠词a．    
5．have改为are 考查固定搭配．这里表示"存在"的有，使用there be 句型．  
6．Climb改为Climbing 考查动名词．分析句子结构，句中缺少主语，用动名词短语climbing the tower作主语．
7．exciting改为excited 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
8．photo改为photos 考查名词复数．photo是可数名词，用a lot of修饰时用复数．
9．much改为many 考查形容词．memories和experiences是可数名词，用many修饰，much修饰不可数名词．
10．去掉the 考查冠词．France意为"法国"，国家前面不加冠词．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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